Set many years after the show, This tragic story recounts an orphans life with one of the mane 6 (identity hidden for spoilers) and her final farewell from Equestria.
This tale leads the reader through a lifetimes worth of memories paying tribute to a pony worth understanding.
Very good. There is a bit of mystery in here that just keeps you reading the entire story.
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Thats what I was aiming for Freeze, Thanks for the feedback
this was well writen
good job
WOW! I love it! I feel I am missing something though, as if there should be a story before this. I shall have to look.
Why was Twilight shunned by the others? Why did Rarity say that Pinkie was the worst of them?
Too many questions... I need answers! lol
All in all, very well done.
you have earned four mustaches!
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Many thanks for the Mustaches (I shall wear them with pride)
The story was written over the space of 4 days for a weekly writers challenge. The unanswered questions shall indeed be answered in up-coming stories of mine (again weekly challenges).
I eventually aim to put them together into a large story known as "The lost tales of Equestria"
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I do look forward to this, and I shall be watching for new stories from you.