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You know what, forget what I just said.
https://giphy.com/gifs/omg-sunglasses-will-smith-6IPNUgkpCsDRK
I feel stupid.
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No need to feel stupid - I'll delete my comment too. Just take in the time to soak in the information you see, double check it - don't be hasty and stuff. There's always multiple things to take into account.
Nice reference to the SAS
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Thanks! I'm really happy someone picked up on this! Wanted to write a bit of a homage and a nice comparative way to show how serious these guys are. All the way down to the staircase grenade, eheh.
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Yup. The Iranian Embassy Siege. I watched a movie about it a while ago. Can't remember the name, but it was really good.
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6 Days from 2017? That's the only one I'm aware of so far I'm afraid.
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Yeah, that's the one.
EMOTIONAL CRIT!
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Looks like it's beginning to rain.
casually lifts gatling autocannon
Does Discord appear in this story?
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Most likely not I'm afraid - in the Equestria at War universe Discord is either just idly watching things unfold, or has gone missing. I do plan to use him in one way tho - but I was thinking more-so for the sequel to this story.
Hmm this seems awfully realistic
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Ain't no better muse for fiction than real life, eh.
Colton spitting all fax, no printer.
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The most tactical advice a team leader can give
Is that a reference to the Vienna coffee house thing with the ol' dictators?
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Yes!!! I'm really happy that was caught onto, albeit I may have made it a bit obvious. I really liked the idea of such a place and thought given the history, it'd be cool to see it in EaW. And I kinda thought vibe-wise, Crystal City worked out.
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Oh? How so?
Of course it was the bug
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Team should pack bug spray from here on out
Does Sunset Shimmer appear in this story?
Bugmom is gonna get busted and possible Nightmare Cadence soon?
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Hehe, the next chapter is gonna show not one, not two, not three, but four ex-villain unicorns. So it's more than likely.
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Wonder what name would work. Heartbreak? Does Cadence have a fanon Nightmare name?
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Not any in specific, though my preference is Heartbreaker (name parallels to the other princesses) and one of my favorite renditions has to be Mournful Frost.
Has Cozy Glow ever appeared in any Equestria At War stories?
SUNSET MY BABY
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Not sure, I'll ask in the Discord server!
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These next few chapters are me indulging in all my favorite reformed unicorns, hehehehe
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she only shows up in April fools event so far, In Twilight theory content she is relased and returns to friendship School however she is late for lesson and for that is thrown into work camp where she is cunning enough to survive for now, as from content from vanilla EAW From information I found she is probally still in Tartarus annoing Tirek to death
Let hope Equus rework have her
OH SWEET LUNA, WHAT DID SUNBUTT UNLEASH ON THE ELF!?
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Just a little bit of trolling.
Shining not being a cheater? Based.
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The based magic of himbo loyalty.
NEEEEJ SUNSET WHYYYYYY
Also, Trixie got PISSED and did something? Based as hell.
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Sunset "minor injury" Shimmer - she's taking it like a champ anyway!
And yeah, don't touch Trixie's GF!!!
...and we're off to a whiplash of a start! I'm a bit of a sucker for investigative thrillers, and it seems like we've got Cipher and his crew set to try to save the world. Well, I'm definitely projecting way too ahead of where I am in the story now, but at the very least, we've got the competence of our
ragtag bunch of misfitsagents down pat. I am worried, though, whether friendship and harmony would survive if they do get in charge of what remains of old Equestria's government.I'm looking forward to the rest of it. Thanks for the story, Mokoma!
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EEE! Sweet! I'm so excited to have you read this!! Thank you!!!
Three (so far) sides going in, then: SIB, the Elements, and Icarus Team. Though, while revelations about motivations can wait, the previous chapter did hit quite so, especially when I get the feeling that the Elements themselves feel either sidelines or (a bit) useless or despairing in the face of a darker, darker world. It'd be funny but also fitting, I'd imagine, for SIB to be this world's take on the Elements of Harmony... friendship forged through a seemingly eternal grit and grind, colored by smoke and alcohol and stress, among worse things.
Contrast the battered and bruised Cipher from a few chapters ago, along with his rather casual team, with ice-cold Icarus, though... setting them up as an unstoppable, maybe sadistic force is a good call if you're gonna throw them at the relatively soft SIB. But we'll see how they fare...
Oh. Oh no. YOU JUST PRESSED THE SHINING BUTTON. YOU SHOULDNTA DONE THAT!!!
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Princess "fuck around find out" Cadence.
Oh, that was VILE. Nighty sure does love her trolling.
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When you can't just tell your alter ego to get out of your head because she's just gonna mockingly copy you
It’s fitting that they have Willy Pete aka phosphorus
Since those things are brutal when Applied to flesh
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Glad you noticed! Flamethrowers would've been a bit too on the nose, and a little archaic!
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Discord would do that, but he might have help with flutter shy to stay safe