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Marezinger Z


Always looking to learn and enhance my craft as well as share in the fandom fun.

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This story is a sequel to All That We Become: I Am the Deep


In spite of how well things have been with Cadence and her family following their reconciliation and newfound bond, Chrysalis is still quite shocked when she is asked to spend the day with Shining Armor and Flurry at the traveling fair. The seemingly benign trip becomes something far more important for both of them as one last awkward wall between the two finally falls.

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“Uh… sure…” He turned and headed back out into the hall; going across to the kitchenette he prepared a bottle and went back across into the bedroom to get Flurry’s swaddle.

You mean bottle right?:duck:

“Bottle?” She raised her brow. “Are you feeling alright, dear?”

One of these is Chrisyalis isn't it?:trixieshiftright:

He looked to the doorway to see Cadence change into Chrysalis in a green plume of magic. “Chrysalis!?”

I figured as much. Then again, the cover art really gives it away.

“Well, can’t argue with those results.” The Stallion pulled the bear down and gave it to Chrysalis.

And if you do, I'll knock your block off!!!-Chrysalis possibly.

“No, that is alright.” She declined. “I don’t have much of a sweet tooth.”

Well you may not have a sweet tooth, but you are a sweetie.:rainbowkiss:

Starlight told me how much progress Cozy Glow has made, so I’m excited to see her and hear how things have been.”

Woo hoo! Best filly reference!:yay:

“We’ll also be hosting some special guests from Griffonstone.” Celestia continued. “It seems that ever since Aurelian and Faye returned the Idol of Boreas to them, they’ve actually been inspired to start rebuilding their home.”

When you realize you've missed a important story and were thinking of the wrong series.:facehoof:

“Oh, before you go.” Cadence produced four golden tickets. “These are your tickets for the Gala; one for you, Tirek, Cozy Glow and Scorpan.”

I look forward to seeing cuddles in a sequel.:rainbowkiss:

“Very much so, mother.” Flurry answered plainly.

Now that's funny.:rainbowlaugh:

“Come on, honey. You got to spend the day with your new girlfriend, so now you get to spend some time with your wife.” She looked back at him with an evil smile.

Careful Cadence. The shippers will hear!:raritydespair:

“That is so… middle school.” He huffed as he followed after her.

Yes it is Shinning Armor. Yes it is.:ajsmug:

This was great.:heart:

Flurry Heart in the stroller was adorable, and I like the way you write momma Chrysalis.:pinkiehappy:

She's way cuter than I thought she'd be.:pinkiesad2:

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Thanks. I'm having fun writing Chrysalis in this series.

I handled Chrysalis quite differently from you, but I enjoyed this alternative. One thing both our stories have in common is that Chrysalis truly cares for children.

Your version of Chrysalis is so fun to read about. Keep up the great work!

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Glad you liked it. Motherly instinct seems a natural course to take with her no matter how she winds up being portrayed overall.

Wow, two stories at once? What a great surprise! Cute little slice of life too. Look forward to your next work as always!

i get the feeling that next story in this shared universe is gonna be an epilogue

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Not quite yet, believe it or not.

Truly heartwarming 💖 It's nice Shining and Chrysalis bond with one another, especially putting a tumultuous past to rest. The future is looking bright for the crystal family and the reformed former queen.

I look forward to seeing how the reformed trio fare at the upcoming gala. So far, everyone has been forgiving towards them. Though admittedly, I have yet to read the Tirek, Scorpan, & Cozy Glow story so I may be wrong (sorry for taking so long). So I wonder if they'll encounter any not so forgiving types in a future story? Like maybe some skeptical/stuck up nobles at the gala? Heck, it doesn't even have to be the gala. Ponyville and the School of Friendship could be ripe with possibilities.

Anyways, amazing story and keep up the great work!

Edit: I've finally read the Cozy Glow story and there was some of the skepticism and hesitation to forgive featured. I do hope see a little more of it featured, it makes for interesting drama.

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Is the next story almost ready yet?

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Been working on it off and on, have had a lot going on with the holidays and other things so I've slowed down a bit.

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