Twilight and Rainbow we're having a perfectly nice day together, until Rainbow did something reckless, and now Twilight has to spend her afternoon cleaning up after the pegasus (Rated Teen with a gore tag just in case but It could probably be rated everyone)
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This was a fun fic to read, well done.
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Thank you!
Well, this was certainly an interesting read. I wasn't expecting where this went, but I'm not wholly dissatisfied. The comedy was good, although I feel like it could have been a little bit slower-paced with a bit more detail. Beyond that, you had some mechanical errors, but nothing too distracting. Altogether, it was pretty good.
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Yeah I can see what you mean. I just had this idea pop into my head and I hadn't wrote anything in a while, so I just sat down and wrote it all out in one go. I might go back and clean some of it up though.
Honestly, very plausible.
Delightful little fic to read, short but sweet.
Of course our resident bookhorse has a contingency plan and is just annoyed at the situation
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Haha, thank you. Your comment made me look over this story again, and wow. As much as I still think this idea, and story, are hilarious, this really isn't my best work lol. Glad you liked it