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If you guys have any questions about the story or setting or in general about the story then go ahead and ask away I’ll be here to answer them as soon as I can.
A very down chapter keep going with it
Hmm interesting and not a bad start
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Thanks for the praise and don’t worry I will.
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Thanks for compliment and praise
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Your welcome
Cool story, it's interesting and i liked it. But check your story before posting it, because there were a few writing mistakes in it. Otherwise good work. Keep on going with it.👍
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Oh I plan on doing that found a tool to help me with that plus some will help me proof read when they get a chance sometimes.
But thanks glad you enjoying it so far.
Interesting concept. I am interested to see where this goes.
One thing I noticed is that Night Rose wasn’t spelled in capitals at the beginning of their words like how I’ve done.
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I did not notice that thanks for the tip/advice
So… you like Tyne story so far huh?
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Glad to hear it.
But if you like it so far then make sure to track it and be ready for chapter 1 the arrival
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Oh be sure to track the story
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It’s only a single chapter so far so I’ll withhold judgment for now.
I really love this chapter 1 please keep going with it
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Oh I will but be sure to track it and give it a thumbs up.
So what interested you in the prologue?
And if you have any questions or want more information on the two parents and the village or anything about the story than I’ll be happy to answer.
That's a sad and awesome story same time.
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Yeah that’s what I was going for.
But have you ever heard of Tom Clancy the division?
And glad you likening it so far be sure to track it too
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No, l never hear it and yes l do like it.
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Well think of smallpox but a thousand times worse and combined with other virus and diseases like Ebola as one of them
As promised I'm here. I have to say it's an interesting start and that AJ gives the element of honesty. she has become something of a dictator with a view that only land ponies matter. I think I have understood it like this, otherwise mea culpa dell' Error.
However, these characters are really interesting. *bares fangs in a grin* I awaited the update with great interest.
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Glad you enjoy it.
And if you think AJ is bad oh boy you should read the other factions.
Plus I can link the factions bio from equestria divided so you have more background on them.
Including house earthborn
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And no just hates unicorns after what happen in canterlot.
Also applejack believes that unicorn magic is unnatural and that magic only causes more harm than good.
Not bad enjoyed this new mix and giggled seeing AJ be racist against anything that ain’t an earthpony, but needs a bit more… laughter hope for more but I’ll wait; for now.
Here. keep the like and favorite to bookshelf kid.
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Don’t forgot to track it too.
And don’t worry their be plenty of laughter in the future
And thanks for the like and addicting it to your bookshelf..
Huh..slightly fast paced and not enough context for my liking...amd the pov is slightly all over the place..but other than that this is a good story
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Yeah I though it was a little bit too fast pace but the main action will kick off next chapter and will try to work on the POV things for the different characters.
But if you have any questions on the equestrian divided universe I’ll be happy to answer them for you.
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Also glad you like it so far…
So what interested you the most in the prologue.
And be sure to like and track it.
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Well it’s technically not chapter one but eh screw it.
And the next chapter is going to be arrival
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The part I liked thr best is the plot of the pov part where the story itself actually starts for me qith the two children losing there mom cause of war stuffs..makes the right prolog for a good story
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Yeah that is what I was going for plus if you have any pony oc you want me to add then feel free to PM(private message me the details).
Also it is set in the equestrian divided universe with the division crossover.
And next chapter is when we will meet them.
I like the concept! noice read!
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Thanks be sure to give it a thumbs up and track it too.
Plus follow me since I may give some sneak peeks of chapters
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Okidoki
..I don't actually have any pony oc's yet I will be honest
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Got it mean while if you have time want me to see over links to the equestria divided factions of the elements.
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Sure..I know relatively what each type of mythical faction is strong against who...I'm prity good at war games so I should be able to help with some things
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https://thedivision.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Factions
This is all the factions in both games
Of the division universe
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https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/50208571/cult-of-laughter
Here’s the first faction and if you scroll down a bit you can see the other factions but recommend you type in equestria divided factions and look on the images since their is quiet a lot of them but I can say that yea the house earthborn uses muskets or the early type of muskets and a ponycopter(and yes there will be a joke about that in a later chapter
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..is that joke gona involve a dependent of discord or pinkie or just someone going "HOW or bucking WHY did we make these like this?!?!?!"?
Also..gona look at thr stuff now
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Ook...fell asleep before o could actually see the stuff.....the cult has actual zerg necromancy type shiz....so yea..I can see the other factions trying there best to eliminate the cult where they can..also..you forgot to put if that creature at the bottom pic was weak to fire or not.cause I can see unicorns of other factions trying there best to use fireballs and stuff like that thinking it would be effective early in the war's....
Now I'm a bit exited to see the other factions if you have the cult of the war this detailed
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No but the ponycopter is apart of the house earthborn faction so it will occur around that or at least one
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Well to be fair I didn’t create the factions someone else did but then the creator took them down but some fans of the equestria divided series were able to save some.
Actually I should probably tell who originally made the equestria divided universe
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Wait what bottom pic?
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Info about house earthborn
https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/50208567/house-earthborn
Info about house sun and moon
https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/50208569/house-moon-and-star
Info about house whitegold
https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/50208575/house-whitegold
Info about house stormwing
https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/50208578/house-stormwing
Info about house Everfree
https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/50208579/house-everfree
And some more info about cult of laughter
https://www.deviantart.com/equestria-divided/gallery/50208571/cult-of-laughter
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The towering flesh thing that's immobile and made up of so many of the brainwashed people
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Yea..you should probably state who originally did it for those who are gona read this and then go exploring for the lore of it so you don't keep getting bugged about it every now and then
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Thanks..gona check them out after I wake up..so frigin tired after all the krao that happend irl for me...including something I probably should not mention to keep things pg in the chat..after all..this is not a porn story or anything like that I assume...unless cadence has a faction like salenesh from Warhammer 40k..then there is a lot of serial stuff that's gona be going on
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No but let’s just say she is apart of the house Star and moon faction along with shining armor but for the role well you have to see the info about house Star and moon faction that I sent you
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Oki doki artachoki...will go check it out in about a hour
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let me know what you think about them after finding out about what shininh armor and candance roles are in the faction
you can used my O.C.s of you want
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/938600/hello-its-my-b-day#comment/5461049
FlashTruth with the unicorn
Zizard is a zebra adopted by Unicorns
Soft Spark, he is very bad at magic
SamuraiKnight with the earth-pony
SharkPuncher, the pegaus... because of his onw wing
CautiousFlight she Can't fly, so...
p.s. she also can't have kids
CloudBusters, he wants to join the pegasus, he is one... but was born with out wings,
A-Dark-ble groing of nutrals living in the forest
Kirouac King of his own land
Dandelion trying to make them think she's an alicorn
Solid Ground mastacking for one
it would be funny to see the Pizza Family in your story