A Sunset cute jinglemiss story of ultimate cuteness and joy as Sunset Shimmer gets Twilight Sparkle the perfect gift!
Written for https://www.fimfiction.net/user/525767/Scarlett_Lilac
Art by Jade Harmony
Specially thanks to Midnight Readings for the idea 💡
Shining armor is male
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Indeed, he, is XD
falling to the ground.*
could only be harvested in Equestria.*
2 spaces are needed following the paragraphs.
ease, not easy.
A space is needed after the first paragraph.
several*
sister-in-law*
These are supposed to be 1 sentence, not 2.
by not bit
Twilight leaned over*
And this should be 2 sentences not 1.
Overall, I enjoyed this story, but it has a lot of mistakes that need fixing.
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Was wondering when I see your comment XD
Maybe next time I should just hire you as a proof reader, but regardless;
Thanks for the love/comment ! ❤️ 🤗
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or get Grammarly.