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Back East, the Lightbringer brought the Day of Sunshine and Rainbows. Here in the Marejave life goes on right until it don't no more for one star crossed Courier. As the New Canterlot Republic moves in from the east with their own ideas about what's best for the rising new Equetria, in the west, the new Pony Caesar of the scattered tribes of the Zebra Legion questions whether it should be equestrian law that dominates. As a ghost war looms between two phantom empires, what sway can one courier have?

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Wait, if I uderetand correctly, thie character is completly invincible, an can't die? At least according to that trait?

Like how your story is turning out. Who is the artist for your story's picture?

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Not invincible, they can definitely get hurt. But basically unkillable, yes. A less useful advantage than you might think for a first person protagonist. :pinkiecrazy:

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Makes sense, but one last question, is there a limit to that ability? Like what will happen to the character if they lose a limb, will it be like in Fallout where it's just crippled, or will it actually be lost?

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That's a good question. Courier Six can definitely suffer from crippled limbs. Actual limb loss would be a major story point, like a cut-scene moment. So, yeah, he could potentially loose a limb. :pinkiecrazy:

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Good, cause I was somewhat scared the character will just win by default, but I like this, otherwise, this story i pretty good, I will try to follow it it, good luck writing it!

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"Now that don't make a lick of sense. Seems to me you're the luckiest son of a gun in New Pegasus."

Ooh! Stable 11, huh? What a fun idea!

Damn, we're breezing through, ain't we?

And she just counts down the caps that dock gave me. “Help yourself to the bottom shelf. If you touch my Wild Pegasus, I’ma gonna shoot you in the head you ain’t been shot in yet.”

Whatever you say, Blackjack.

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Uh... I haven’t read this story yet. Is that suppose to be a good or bad thing?

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