As the two alicorn sisters try to defend their ponies and other creatures from an unknown threat in their final stand. Their hope slowly dies as one by one their loved ones are taken by unknown entities. But at the last threads of hope, a Sorcerer that is not of this world is there to help.
Disclaimer: My Little Pony is owned by Hasbro, Doctor Strange is owned by Marvel, Disney, Steve Ditko and Stan Lee. The only character I own are a few other made up characters. Please know that this is only for fun and entertainment only. Your discretion is advised.
Chapters (10)
Why aren't Celestia and Luna in the cover art?
Nice job with the 2nd chapter. However, there is one big problem with it. It is essentially a retelling of the original Strange Tales #110 comic only with ponies added and the changing of Crang to Blueblood. Yes, you left out a couple things, like the Ancient One, but it still is pretty much a ripoff of that comic story. If you’re going to do that for future chapters, you should at least acknowledge that fact and credit the writer and artist (in this case, Stan Lee and Steve Ditko) for the original story and note what issue the original story was in so readers can enjoy that as well if they wish from the various reprints Marvel has put out over the years.
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Thank you for telling me! I appologise for compeletly forgetting to credit the original writers in the middle of the night. I will try to remember that for every unoriginal chapter I post. Thank you much!
You’re welcome. Hope you didn’t see my comment as too critical. I do think you did a pretty good job in in telling the story and changing it enough to make it more ‘pony-oriented. It can be a bit hard to write a text version of a comic book, but you did a good job in your description - that’s how I was able to recognize the story as from Strange Tales 110. Been a fan of Doctor Strange for a long time and I remember that very first story fairly well. Should be interesting to see how you translate future chapters from the comics to pony form. You should consider making some chapters your own stories, especially in interactions with various ponies, such as Pinkie and her impossible powers! 😁
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I will take that in mind.😁
Are they My Little Pony characters or Marvel Comics characters?
You mean like what character they are from? I'd say My little Pony, like the female royal guard, that I will give a name one day.
You should explain better what size everyone is, the way you explain it is really confusing.
You say he is as tall as a regular pony, but in the same phrase you say that he is as tall as Celestia, who is 3 times the size of a regular pony... Is confusing.
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Sorry, let me explain. I used a real life horse and pony scale to compare of a human height. Ponies are 4 feet, Celestia seems to me as tall as a horse (maybe even taller) so I put her at 5 feet, and since a human male is usually an average 5'6'', I put Doctor Strange a few inches shorter than Celestia. Sorry for the confusion. I will maybe re-edit this chapter. I may have accidentally left this part unscrapped.
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5"6 is like 1,65 cm correct? Seems really short, though depends where you live I think in Thailand the average height is 150 cm or something like that.
And doctor strange is 6"2 (1.88 cm) here is the link.
http://www.marveldirectory.com/individuals/d/drstrange.htm#:~:text=Height%3A%206%20ft.,Weight%3A%20180%20lbs.&text=Known%20Powers%3A%20Dr.
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ALT. Universe. This version of Doctor Strange isn't your average pre-retconned, overpowered, Earth 616 or 19999 Doctor Strange, this is a different Doctor Strange. If it looks like I made a mistake, like a plot hole, then there is probably an explanation down the line if you wait and let me explain in the next page. You just have to wait and find out why I changed the height of Doctor Strange.
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I see, what universe Doctor Strange is he based of? Or is he a OC kind of Doctor Strange?
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I really wanted to keep this secret until I reveal it in the next chapter or two, but I guess I'll say out loud (or in this case, type it out). This version of Doctor Strange is an OC, from a universe similar to 616 and 1016. That is all I will say until the chapter of his past is published.
Are any other Marvel Comics characters going to appear in this story?
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Maybe. It depends, but mostly Doctor Strange characters. Any other marvel character are either just mentions or references.
When i read the description of the Mindless Ones, my mind immediately brought up an image of a Locust from Gears of War.