This story is a sequel to of a diming star
this is an alternant universe where all creatures from MLP:FIM are living in MINECRAFT. there are also key differences to some characters. 1, button doesn't have his hat 2, StarGazer (my OC) has his mane combed back instead of his usual messy mane and finally 3, all characters have different cutie marks the only expectations are the CMCs and the main 6.
So some suggestions. Go through and read after posting completed chapters. It'll help you notice errors that should be corrected.
Try to work toward something over time. A boss. An event. A plot point. it'll keep people coming back for more, the more intriguing it is.
There's a lot of heart here, just needs some focus.