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Love it. Nice development you have here.
I Like it but i wana see more drama. Have him do something brash in his hopeless attitude towards life, like having him jump off the edge of the balcony, you know something along those lines. MOAR DRAMA!!!
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With they way I've set the story up, I kind of feel like it would be out of character if Jeremy just jumped in front of the first passing bus or something .
He had his death all planned out, down to the music playing and everything, but was interrupted before he could get the job done. Oh, and I think it bares repeating what interrupted him too!
If I was going to commit suicide and a bunch of talking, Crayola-colored ponies tried to stop me, heck, I'd probably listen out of pure curiosity at first . Then, afterward, who knows? Maybe a bit of comfort and the power of friendship could start to heal what had been broken .
Just feels like it would flow better that way .
Thanks for the comment though!
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MO DRAMA FO YO MAMA
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You do have me there, I've never tried heroin and don't really want to . Still, I've messed with other opiates in general (opium, morphine, and oxycodone) and I have to assume that the results are similar.
Vicodin, on the other hoof, is a whole different bowl of fruit. Hazy, drowsiness-inducing fruit that makes bad TV more enjoyable. Don't drink on it though, your liver will kindly ask you to step outside and pummel you with a broken rake handle if you do .
Oh gods he turns into a pony I despise human turned pony fics
the inly way this would have been better is if he had a family he neede to take care of
Feels man... Them feels