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CrimsonBrony4812


I am a young writer hoping to make some stories for people to enjoy. Click the link to join my discord server (if you want to) https://discord.gg/ncM3DDn5

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After Drake is exiled by his sister Celestia, he travels to a nearby kingdom called Unicornia and settles there for a while

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

Please feel free to comment on how you think the story was, I would love to hear your feedback. I plan to have the third and final chapter coming out soon.

cool keep up the good work

The ending stunk. Celestia turns her sister into nightmare moon and nothing about why . She just gets forgiven with no punishment?!

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I have another story: A Family Split, that explains a little bit more about the confrontation of Drake and the Alicorns and explains a little bit more about Celestia turning Luna into Nightmare Night. As far as Celestia being without punishment, Celestia is brought to her knees in my first story, and she loses total control of Equestria to share with her siblings l

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It just Celestia still gets to live in the palace and see the people she knows unlike the other two who had to spend a 1000 yrs away everyone they cared about. Luna got it the worst because the moon is pretty boring when it comes to places to live . No warmth no friends no air. No sound.

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