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Spyder27


I am Spyder27 and I write MLP stories! I'm known as the Emperor of Sundagio by friends~ I don't write free stories, so DM me for comm details. Follow me if you want regular updates on my stories~

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Set during an Old West Earth, Adagio Dazzle is the leader of a gang, living up her life as much as she can. However, a certain fiery-haired woman has caught her eye, making Adagio evaluate her life once more. After her day of drinking at the saloon, the gang leader finds out she is being kicked out of the gang she established. In the most unceremonious way possible as well... After all is said and done, Adagio finally realizes her own feelings for Sunset Shimmer and decides that she has to keep on living just to see her one more time.


Hello, everyone! This little short story is an entry into the Sunset x Villain Period Piece contest! I know I'm cutting it a little close, but that's because I really struggled coming up with a story idea I would actually like to write. This story is inspired by Red Dead Redemption, a video game I played a lot when I was younger and I highly recommend you do so too! It has a great story and entertaining characters, so it is worth one playthrough, even if you don't like shooting games!

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All right am saving this. I like the premise. But i gotta read some more of it.

Just a warning, it looks like you still need to add this to the contest folder.

Very nice. Wouldn’t mind seeing this expanded myself.

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I do actually have a little idea for a sequel if I ever do get to it~ It would be even more inspired by Red Dead Redemption, but yeah~

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Thanks for the heads up! I already messaged one of the moderators because I couldn't seem to add it to the group folder, but now it finally works~

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Ah, yeah. If you’re the first one to add a story to a contest, it’s always better to try adding it with the “Add to Groups” function on the fic page, rather than directly on the contest folder. (Idk if you tried that and it still didn’t work, but glad things are fixed now.)

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I know nothing about that series so it would all be the same to me

Yay, another entry! :yay:

I mean, your story here.

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I did not try that! I will have to look into that if I'm the first to add a story to a folder again~ Thanks for the info! :twilightsmile: I was definitely worried since I wasn't able to add it to the folder, but thankfully it fixed itself :rainbowlaugh:

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It's a pretty good game series with great stories set during the old west~ I'd suggest giving the playthrough a watch over, but you don't have to. XD I'm glad you liked the story!

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XD I am always glad to enter my stories into your contests because it always gives me a new chance to flesh out previous ideas~ :twilightsmile:

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XD I am always glad to enter my stories into your contests because it always gives me a new chance to flesh out previous ideas~

When someone says 'your contests,' and I wonder if they think Sunset x Villain contests are mine just because I'm an admin on the group.
🤔

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Well, it is the group's competitions, so in a way, admins have responsibility over them, even if they didn't come up with the original idea. :twilightsmile:

“Just because you helped me save my saloon doesn’t mean you’re exempt from the rules, Adagio,” Sunset tells the siren sternly, still letting Adagio get away with whatever she wants.

I still think she should've taken the alcohol bottle from Adagio.

“Why would I want that? You’d be taking away the biggest source of my revenue,” Sunset tells her with a chuckle, placing the bottle back down. Her eyes finally connect with Adagio’s again, a sense of happiness behind them. For some reason, Adagio can’t help but… enjoy it. “You’d also be taking away my favorite customer,” Sunset whispers with a wink, making the gunslinger blush for the first time in her life. In her long life span, she had never met someone who affected her like this, but maybe… it’s because Sunset is similar to her.

Seems like where they currently are, they're relationship isn't 100% perfect. :applejackunsure:

Slowly looking back to the other gang members, Adagio can’t believe her eyes. The hairs on the back of her neck stand on end… Approximately fifteen pistols and shotguns were all aimed at her, everyone looking at her with a cold, unfeeling expression. Every fiber of her being wants to do something, but she’d be dead in a second with this many guns… Maybe she could deflect a few with her magic, but all of them? Not really…

https://m.

“By ‘you girls’, I meant Aria and Sonata.” Cutting Aria free, Trixie laughs and turns around right as the fire reaches the house. The last thing Adagio sees is Aria sprinting towards the house before her vision finally goes black…

Damn, she stabbed not only Adagio's back, but her sisters too! :pinkiegasp:

Even though Adagio didn’t know what she could say, she knew what she could do… Groaning slightly, Adagio pushes herself up a little more, much to the surprise of Sunset. Adagio places both of her hands on Sunset’s cheeks, looking into Sunset’s eyes with affection. Even though she’s a siren, Adagio can’t deny these feelings in her heart… In one movement, Adagio presses her lips against Sunset’s, solidifying her feelings with a single kiss… Her head swirls and she can’t quite make sense of her feelings, but… she knows that she will be able to work them out sooner or later…

I ship it. :scootangel:

Adagio grinds her teeth slowly, grabbing her pillow. “SHUT THE FUCKING DOOR!”

Some things never change. :ajsmug:

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Yeah, their relationship definitely isn't perfect, but it is still cute nonetheless~ I'm glad I made a story nice enough to make you ship them~ :raritywink: And yes~ Some things really never change~ Even if they're apart for three and a half years :rainbowhuh:

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