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^ Agrees.
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Pony female — Check
Human male — Check
Hormones — Check
Yeah, that seems right.
BEST CHAPTER...YET!!
ONWARD!!!
1358606 TO FA- I MEAN VICTORY!
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DAWWWWWWW
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Nono, fap is fine.
Sorry, I normally don't point out grammatical errors, but this one was during the best part! "Their eyes close as they held the kiss." Should either be closed or hold.
Again sorry, but it's hard enough for me to take this kind of writing seriously in the first place. XD I'm LOVING the story so far by the way.
“I thought for a second that a Human had broken in and was molesting Chains,” he said nonchalantly."
I lost it XD
I LOLed so hard, I drooled.
Oh dear. This will end badly.
Hmm, cute. At least the kiss started out as human-with-human so that's fine. begs the question if she'll turn Chains into a pony any time soon.
I am truly sorry I had to point that out, but my inner grammar nazi kept punching me in the metaphorical face.
Just a small piece of advice: the first word of a quotation/line of dialogue should always be capitalized, even if it's in the middle of a sentence.
I have the most awkward boner right now...
Nicely written. Of course, hormone rage does terrible things to people; nice to see what was pulled off here. Kudos.
You know, i can´t help but wonder why she didn´t asked him if his comment about her human beauty means he doesn´t think of her being beautiful when she´s in her real body as a pony unicorn.
Or better i wonder if she will wonder in the future chapters if Chains find her normal self hideous and ugly and undesireable.
On the other hand he didn´t broke the kiss when she turned back so...
I also think that at this point Celestia would really like to take her "Follow your heart" advise back. XDDD
So Blue Star didnt got any nicer at all? Did he at least warmed up to Twi and Spike in those 8/4 years or does he still have a stick up his ass?
Oh, and your Spike was spot-on, loved every moment of him in this chapter!
"i thought for a second that a human had broken in and was molesting Chains"
Dat part...
Good god, its 2 am, my moms sleeping in the next room and i couldnt help but loudly laugh like a fucking maniac! xD
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Yea the way he said it made me wtfomgwth but it's just
Ohh hi twilight, Ohh molesting chains again no biggie I'm taking a nap night!
They should have sex, as ponies and humans and as human and pony, think of all you will learn Twilight!
This is relevant.
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My reaction.
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Whoo-boy! In this cultural context, that was quite the rebellious thing for Twilight to do! And dangerous, too.
For some reason this makes me wonder where Shining Armor has been all this time?
2439728 I'm going to have to agree to that.
Spike shrugged and went to his bed, and laid himself out in it. “Whatever, I’m taking a nap,” he said. “Whatever you two do, just keep it down,” he said, again, turning both of their faces red as scarlet.
I love how Spike just does not give two fucks about what they're doing.
And there goes some more cultural preconceptions.
Isn't Spike like, nine or something? And he's just nonchalant about a possible rape situation?
He's freaking, like, nine or ten!
*cries softly in the corner of the room*
the straw that broke the camels back, only in this case it's more like a hay bale.
anyway, i like this chapter a lot. not only because i'm one for a good romance, but because this romance is not unreasonable. like you said in the a/n hormones do things to people and ponies alike. i agree and the fact that they grew up together, Twilight was the only one to ever be nice to him and he was the only friend she had ever had, truly.
also, where's Shining Armour? i think he would have some reservations about a male human with Twilight all the time. and yes, i am perfectly fine with this fic being an alt. universe thing where Shining got killed, kidnapped or was never born in the first place, for the sake of story line.
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...ummm
Sure it kinda make sense.. but i expected curiosity and confusion, not a blush... or at least not as the first reaction, maybe after a moment after he connect the dots.
Ponies are naked all the time anyway. Always. Even Celestia.
Its not like he doesn't know what a naked Twilight looks like, or what naked human and pony anatomy (perfect memory + books + naked ponies everywhere)
They certainly don't care about nudity taboos. Hence why the insta-blush could have waited a bit imho.
This was gold:
Real savvy there Spike.
3435777 Unfortunately I've heard six year olds talk about it
HOLY CRAP I JUST GOT SOMETHING
Blue star=? What else is blue in the story? A sun. a blue sun is also a blue star because a sun is a starbur wait. How many letters does the word sun have? Three. Three=tri. Tri=triangle. Triangle =illuminati. ILUMINAT CONFARMD
5916903 wait, what? NO!!! blue star is the symbol of that human tribe, last chapter. and the guards name is blue star... so theres that!
also... ILUMINATI
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Spike is the MVP of this chapter.
I'm enjoying this story I like it even more than I thought I would
Just found this story today and I'm enjoying it so far, And here is my reaction to this chapter.
Edit: just saw that someone already beat me to this.
Don't make promises you can't keep. Other than that, not a bad chapter.
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Cock block *cough cough* XD
I feel like the "romance" here was a bit sudden. It seemed forced but only a little, the kiss made sense in a weird convoluted way, I guess I can rationalize why it happened, but Twilight teasing him all the sudden is something we're not used to seeing her character doing, there wasn't really a reason for her to do it/it seems against her character.
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