Despite her redemption, and strong friendship with Twilight Sparkle, Sunset Shimmer is was still feeling envy and rage. Until her friend gets everything that Sunset wanted.
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To be fair sunset could’ve become a princess if she was more patient. As for celestia’s plan, sounds interesting and could go many routes.
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If you like stories that are a little conspiratorial then "The Hidden Story" is one of mine that you might enjoy
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Cool
Interesting take, and Shimmers right in all honesty.
Twilight's definitely a puppet 100% If you look closer you can easily tell that her whole life was definitely being manipulated and controlled from the very start.
If only that grey Twilight from The Folly of Celestia asked the right questions. She would have opened up the eyes of our Twilight to the truth.
And yes, even that story also proves just how much Celestia is controlling Twilight, because she too never asked the right questions, the difference is that she never tries to.
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WAs celestial a good teacher is the question I mean she throws twilight in the deep in with no time to think and rarely intervene in matters her help would solve. We have a little of idea on what she thought sunset. So 🤷♀️🤔
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Tire but you also have to think about how was celestial was back then compare when twilight was her student she could have acted different with both students.
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Where can I read The Folly of Celestia?
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HERE
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I don’t think she acts that different between the two. Unless I’m missing something.
I don't know enough about the Equestia Girls spin off to really comment on most of this content but I will say that this is a well written story that I enjoyed.
Well, maybe Sunset could ask a audience with Twilight and ask her what she feels, if she feels as Celestia puppet or not, surely she could make a little time, is not like Celestia could not make time for Twilight or give audience time.
The plot is not new, you are not the first to theorize that Celestia had Twilight under control all the time and was a chessmaster. But it was a good reading.
And they let you serve customers out of uniform?
Lucky girl.
I approve of this cannon.
That's adorable.
Huh. I'd like to read that story.
That's... Very mature and intelligent of you Sunset. I approve.
Yes.
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The twisted Twilight story is the Folly of Celestia, which you can read here https://www.fimfiction.net/story/248728/the-folly-of-celestia
Or watch here https://youtu.be/ufW5tpG_eAQ?si=x7KBpUt2clawPUql
If you want to know how Fluttershy and Sonata got on at the concert then try this https://www.fimfiction.net/story/539724/fluttershy-rocks-out
If you are a fan of Sunset, try my other story here https://www.fimfiction.net/story/538122/sunset-shimmers-loss
I tackle Celestia being manipulative here https://www.fimfiction.net/story/536429/the-hidden-story but that was one of my first stories and is a little... rough. I'm thinking of doing a rewrite.