Lasso

A young filly, overwhelmed with life, runs away to end it. But that leads her to choose if she should use her lasso to end her life or rescue someone else's.

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Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #1 · Jul 25th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Ooo. What a twist!

hoofbeatsoftime

hoofbeatsoftime #2 · Jul 25th, 2023 · 1 · ·

A heartfelt and hopeful story ❤️

overdue

overdue #3 · Jul 26th, 2023 · 1 · ·

woah, from the description and the first few paragraphs the concept is already fully formed, and what a concept. it's literally perfect

Acoustic Pulse

Acoustic Pulse #4 · Jul 26th, 2023 · 1 · ·

This was really sweet. I'm glad I took the time to check this out.

6-D Pegasus

6-D Pegasus #5 · Jul 26th, 2023 · 2 · ·

aww that ending tied it all together so beautifully, this is now gonna be my headcanon for how they met

ThePeer

ThePeer #6 · Aug 7th, 2023 · 1 · ·

oh, look, a story!

small criticism, it was hard to keep track of what was going on at some points of the story. Probably because its 3 am right now for me, and I am pretty tired, but still. It is paced alright, although a little to fast for my sleepy sleepy brain. Besides that, me likey :D

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