Alternate episode 'The Cutie Remark'. Twilight is trapped in the Ashlands timeline where Equestria was destroyed and must find her way back to her own time. There she finds an enemy she never expected to fight: her other self Midnight Sparkle.
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awesome chapter, why do i have a feeling we will get another heart braking next chapter like muffin's
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It's not a super happy setting >.>
I still love the pacing so far! Well, except when it breaks up from switching to a different POV at a previous time. Otherwise, I am enjoying their character interactions.
The sad part that Munro point out is that the plot seems to be set up for disaster and misery. So far, it feels kinda fast with the deaths, like the story is setting up for the ending relatively early.
I guess it's unfair to judge this against the giant FoE and FoE Horizons. Their word counts kinda help spread the misery out rather than expecting the gang to die every day/chapter. Gotta grow some positives in their world of finalities.
In any case, I am still anticipating for more of your unique Fallout.
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It is meant to be its own story though I use a lot of the terminology and make references to FOE to honor it. As for sadness, it is definitely an 'anyone can die' story, but it's also a world where there exists ways to cheat death and events, so some of the deaths you don't expect to might not stick.