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Princess Luna was forced to exile Celestia into the sun, after the latter had been corrupted by dark magic and lost control. No one knew the truth outside of Luna, StarSwirl, and the guards. What will happen when the truth comes to light? Will Luna be able to get Celestia back to normal?
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Oh that's awesome
11741096
Thank you!
Interesting lead in, I am interested to see where this goes. One tiny request: can we get some kind of punctuation (a horizontal rule, or what have you) when the scene shifts?
11741165
In what sense? I didn't understand
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okay for example:
The first paragraph is the end of the fight, i think.
But when Starlight speaks to Luna, it seems to be some time later. Have i understood you correctly?
All i was suggesting was some kind of divider between scenes, for example
a line across the page, often called a Horizontal Rule in layout terms. It makes it a little easier for the reader. I use a single Em Dash as a scene divider, but it's totally up to you if you want to use anything at all. Hope my input is useful, best wishes.
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Got it, thank you very much! The point is that I've recently used Fimfiction and I don't know all the options it has. Next time I will definitely do it. Thanks for telling me! ^^
it's about of perspective
11747091
What do you mean?
11747096
As I read the Story, It was the perspective that Luna is correct , for her actions .
But based on perspective the reason could be understood, or misinterpreted or thought it was nothing wrong .
Or based on perspective to think it is wronged
And in that the perspective Sometimes gets unclear who is in the wrong .
And based of the opinion to interpret the opinion to the others . And making the opinion and Perspective bias by the the provided information.
And it goes all about Perspective,point of view, ways to do it and final goal .
Which could go wrong if the way to achieve is wrong , And wrong to who is also in perspective
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I Understand