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I thought about having a normal life, but everything goes nuts after an not so ordinary day...
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Hmmm...Human changed into a Changeling...interesting. There are a few mistake but easier ignored. I'm pretty interested. Tracked.
And i take from the majority of the story that you LOVE Borderlands 2? Hehe. I play Axton as well, Awesome class.
Anyway back to the story....yeah so, you gained a follower. Looking forward to the rest
Seen worse. Not a bad start. Keep it up. a like and watch.
1401505 Well, I saw all of these 'One of the Mane 6 is a changeling' stories, but not a single one with a human and since I like HiE fictions I came to this idea...
Aaand yes, you are right, I love Borderlands 2
Doesn't make a lick of sense. But I like the premise! As said above, spotted a few errors, but nothing bad.
Let's see where you go with this, colour me intrigued.
The premise seems decent and the writing isn't bad. Keep it up. I've only seen one other Human is a Changeling on Earth story on here.
Well, this is interesting.
This looks interesting so far.
"Didn't you say that it would air sometime in the fall?" Cell replied.
This was one of the errors that I spotted.
hm, interesting story so far. Who could that voice be at the end? Something tells me its either his mother or father, about to tell him a few family secrets, perhaps?
But, keep up the good work.
Contractions contractions contractions.
The dialogue sounds too formal without them.
damn these cliff hangers
after hitting luna with that keyboard, I'm gonna have to agree with you on that
1468068 i concur
Random guess but isn't the autobahn the length of road where there isn't a speed limit. Or am i thinking of something else?
1480558 100% correct.
1480568 Yesh! And the noise breakers...basically high walls?
1480581 Basically yes, anyway, how was the chapter?
1480585 Oh yes. Very good. FTL, Luna has found them again. Looking forward to MOAR!
1480568 a road without a speed limit?
you guys are crazy
1480617 Yup, basically you can drive with a Bugatti Veyron at full speed, you just need to avoid other cars
1480646...and losing control...main priority
Princess Celestia, oh you and your secrets.
*Cheerfully* Hi!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Queen_Chrysalis.png
There were some minor grammar issues, but other than that, great chapter!
Celestia is going to be shocked at what our weapons can do. She may be immortal, but I'm pretty sure she can have a very terrible horrifying pain if she got shot. And shock as an extra for not knowing what had just happened. Same goes to Luna too.
OH and here's a message to Cell and ...Yan was it? Look to both left and right and that will be your weapon against Luna Boss Battle!
1491797 She may be immortal, but isn't bullet-proof. /citation_end
1492432 She's not melee proof too ya know
FUUUUUU WOONA WHY YOU GO TO MODERN EARTH BAD BAD PONY!
Cliffhangers, cliffhangers everywhere
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1510682 What.
1510843 YES
-dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png Not again!
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png ...Or maybe not.
Congratulations! You are officially worst Brony!
Just joking.
Interesting chapter. Now, let's see if the military arrives before Luna (and/or Ryu, Cell, and Yan) disappear, due to the mysterious voice (probably Princess Celestia, Princess Cadance, Shining Armor, or Queen Chrysalis <because why not?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Queen_Chrysalis.png >).
Round 2....FIGHT!
I knew there's gonna be a boss battle! I Freakin Knew it!
This appears to be more exciting than I first thought.
Oh boy it's now time for the boss fight, I just really really hope that she'll understand the real situation when it's over. WHY did they have to delete it?
Okay is it wrong for me to laugh at Luna for getting the worst end of the stick of being beaten up by bronies defending themselves from her and running away from her. I hope that isn't a secret agent that caught up with them. Things just keep getting worse for the poor dudes.
1517392 It will get worse.. MUCH worse...
More please
1517342
What do you mean with delete? Delete what?
"too much" hell yea
1544165 Damn, seems like I mixed up some different edited chapters
and just where was the boss fight?
i see you tried to correct it, yet there are still parts where the generals name is Martin
Need to move the ". Good chapter...Am i getting a feeling of an all out battle between ponies and humans happening?
1544379 Only if you think that the last sentence is a hint
I only wish that you can try to convince them that you're not a bad guy and focusing their attention on the wrong human-turned-changeling.
Oh, nothing much. Just knocking her out repeatedly and then running for their lives away.
I bet some people will be surprised at what can be used as a deadly weapon.
Just because it doesn't look the part doesn't mean it isn't.
For example, a plastic bag can be used to brutally murder any poor basterd by suffacation.
Look up Manhunt 2 for examples.
You wanted action?
1491797 Huzzah! Hope you like their "shocking" experience with our weapons
That was totally some action and what's more our heroes managed to get to Equestria, but can they convince everyone they're on the same side or will the ponies' feelings get in the way that they've been barking up the wrong tree and Shining will be even more danger? Also I was just hoping that they would get Shining to help but nnnnooooooooo... I bet Cadance and Shining will be distrustful of humans even after the story is over.
Lol. i like Ryu. Reminds me of myself.