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Zeprto678
Hi, I love to write fanfiction and read fanfiction. My Avatar is a pony that I adopted from đź’« Abyss đź’« on Amino.
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I really like this story.
No grammatical mistakes from what I've read.
Only problem I have is that the MC's name is being repeated too many times. Maybe give him some nickname or use his human name when you are doing his inner monologue or telling the story in the 3rd person.
Besides that minor problem, the story is great
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Thanks. I'm glad you like it. ^^ đź‘Ť
Also, sorry. I've been busy with my stories, life, and other stuff that I forgot to respond back until now. Btw, I think the new chapters might have that problem fixed. Though, coming up with a nickname that everyone can call him by will be a bit hard, but I might be able to think up one in the near future.
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Why not call him “Corry”? Also, what’s the Equestriaverse?
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Maybe. Also, the Equestriaverse is the nickname for the MLP Multiverse. It's what people called it back then and it still goes by that name.