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Rainbow Dash never liked Rarity’s attention to detail and need for cleanliness, she’d rather get stuff done as quick as possible, so what happens if she gets transported to a world with just Raritys?

This fic was requested by JBlaser

Do not expect a Stranger Things crossover!

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fluffytailmofu #1 · February 8th · · ·

As much as this was a potentially funny story concept, the story SERIOUSLY needs a spellcheck.

Hyper Star #2 · February 8th · · ·

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I’m not quite sure what you mean, I read the story twice and failed to notice any spelling mistakes (nor grammar mistakes, for that matter), could you could point some mistakes out?

fluffytailmofu #3 · February 8th · · ·

How about sentences ending either in commas or with no punctuation to close them at all? That's the most obvious example that stuck out when I read the fic- and it's also an example that would have been caught by spellcheck. Seriously, just use spellcheck, as it's not that hard to use.

Hyper Star #4 · February 9th · · ·

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Fixed a few (if not all) mistakes, thanks for pointing that out.

hulkchloron99 #5 · February 9th · · ·

How about instead of "commissioned", what about "requested"?

Hyper Star #6 · February 10th · 1 · ·

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Thanks

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KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #7 · February 10th · · ·

You did a way better job writing this than I did. Your story flows more naturally and is more comedic.

Hyper Star #8 · February 11th · 1 · ·

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Thanks! Glad you liked it

hulkchloron99 #9 · February 11th · · ·

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You're welcome.

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