“I'm the first to know, my dearest friends,/Even if your hope has burned with time,/Anything that's dead shall be regrown,/And your vicious pain, your warning sign,/You will be fine.” –Angels And Airwaves, ‘The Adventure’
Spike has always had a happy existence as Twilight's assistant. He never felt out of place or unloved and couldn't ask for more. However, one night while looking at an old photo album with Twilight Sparkle, Spike asked about his parents. Unable to give an answer to satisfy both of them, Twilight and Spike go to Princess Celestia for help. But will she even know how to answer? What will this lead to?
Ooh, the adventure starts
But there are things that could have been changed. For example: "Spike was in amazement of the large room. He looked in wonderment "
You should say "Spike was amazed by the the large room. He looked in awe "
Also, you wrote "if I my" isntead of " if I may"
Still, looks promising
I'm going to take a guess and say that pony is either Celestia or part of some secert group invovled with Spikes family.
1838855 Never be to sure about anything
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I'm just grasping straws here. Though I will keep reading to see where this goes.
1840481 Well, get comfortable, it's a long story. And I'm writing it on and off.
I'm looking forward to see where this goes!