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Will I See You Again??

Flash contemplates the fact that he might never see Twilight again. However, he knows that he can never get over her.

Maybe there's a bit of an encounter at the end...

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GuardianDemonsWriter #1 · February 24th · · ·

This is a good story, if a bit rushed at the end. I feel like there should have been more at the end. Like how did Twilight get there and why she was there in the first place. There is no portal to Equestria at Camp Everfree, so she would have to use the Canterlot High one. And I don't know the distance between the two, so I don't know how Twilight would have gotten there. This might sound like I'm being nitpicky, but I'm just pointing things out and it's a good fic regardless.

Also, to go along with the picture, maybe there could be another chapter (titled "I can't get over him) that details Twilight's side of things. Just a suggestion.

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