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Redacted. Here to protect you in secret from the monsters that are invading Eqeustria.
By any means necessary.
Chapters to be posted everyday until complete.
Content Warnings will be noted at the start of all chapters. All Content is mild with no graphic depictions. Gore is tagged more to cover bases.
Entry to the 2024 Science Fiction Contest.
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Heh. As Samwise Gamgee showed us, every mind-blasting horror’s greatest weakness is a simple gardener.
Truly fascinating work thus far. Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here, especially given the question of just how long Celestia can keep these plates spinning. Sure, a thousand-year track record is quite impressive, but there’s a first time for everything.
I really love the way you've written Mr Greenhooves here, his logic about The Rules is absolutely sound. I like the touch of Earth Pony magic being used to encourage growth rather than just "Earth Pony grow good".
I'm keen to know more about these entities that Celestia is containing, why she is keeping them from being handled by the Elements of Harmony and just how long The Rules and the beautiful clover garden can keep them contained.
Wonderfully creepy work on both of these. I have several questions about the nature of Flash and Granny both. It may just be possible to negotiate some degree of coexistence with the monsters, but that feels like a big “may.”
In any case, it appears Celestia’s little ponies have to deal with the true horror of this world despite her best efforts. Though there is the question of how bad it would be without the covert ops…
I love Mr. Greenhooves.
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Granny feels like she's also an eldritch horror, but one in ...control? of herself.
Flash on the other hand, well, whatever happend there can't be good
Liking this weird as heck thing so far~!
The continuity despite the mostly disjointed chapter nature continues to fascinate :)
And this is why you should tell the others, Celestia.
Celestia kept the other Princesses in the dark because she wants to protect them. Only for one to get hurt by this lack of knowledge.
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(Also, outstanding work thus far.)
Well. This system is unsustainable in any number of levels. We’re looking at the last days of Equestria unless something drastic happens. We’ll just have to see what that is, if anything.
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Oops. Sorry about that. Fixed.
And glad to hear you're enjoying the story :)
Huh. Was not expecting that.
Yeah, people seeking an escape to another universe won’t generally be in a good place mentally. The fact that there are facilitators on the other side advertising other worlds to ruin is an unexpected and deeply concerning development. Looking forward to further insights.
Lightning Dust endowed with the power of extradimensional monstrosities...
This is how the world ends. Not with a bang, but with a "Hold my cider."
In any case, fascinating glimpses at a world on the precipice of disaster. Eagerly looking forward to future installments. Best of luck in the judging.
Gonna keep my eye on you
I love how each is its own short little story of sorts, connecting and weaving into the larger narrative
That was a delight, looking forward to future stuff in this world~! There's so many fun 'Ooh, why is that happening?' elements here!