One last letter from a dead lover who lost her everything.. Why? Did it worth it? No, not at all.. If only she knew from the beginning..
Thanks hazelfrmfshlv for proof reading.
Trigger Warnings: Mentioned suicide (not heavyly)
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Like to see a second part Sunset's reaction to this the aftermath, and how her parents and family reacted t this.
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
HELP!!!! Doomed Yuri my favorite.... I need second chapter with sunsets reaction. If she cares? if she doesn't? I need to see. 
this fic is definitely a new favorite of mine
“Didn’t you ever love me?”
Dang, this hurts!
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Well, I can write it if you want.. Anything for readers, you know ;)
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Lol xd
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Awww thank youu <3 I just love writing angst.. And second chapter will come, don't worry!
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Glad it did :')
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Thanks, let them face the consequences of their actions.
To abandoning their daughter/sister/sister in aw, to Sunset facing she drove someone who loved her to death.
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Oh, they will face consequences...
This was such a sad read in a good way lol. You know I don't like suicide or self harm stories most of the time but I really like yours. And I guess I'm honored I got to beta read it? Haha.
(Also, if you want help with the second part you know who to come 👀)
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You know, I also don't like the stories with sad endings, especially if it's a suicide story.. But I had to make an exception for this idea.. Anyway, we've got an additional chapter to do..
I hope sunset faces consequences.
I was rereading it so the ideas I planned on giving you was accurate but damn. I think the whole thing is downing on me just know. Because reading it felt so heavy for the first time while it was my third or fourth read y'know. The whole emotions, plot, consequences... I only now realize what this all actually meant.
This reminded me of what I felt when you told another fiction's plot to me. I don't remember the name, so I'll tell you the plot. I hope you'll get the idea. Sunset and Twilight loved each other, but they had to cut contacts for the sake of the human and the pony world to not collapse. Sunset said one last message, Twilight broke the contact, and learned that Sunset's last message was "I love you".
I know I had a "couldn't care less" attitude that day, but when I thought about it, that fic was as equally heavy on me as this one. I know it was heavy on you too. So I probably feel like how you felt that day.
I'm not sure if it's because I'm sensitive about suicide and sad endings, but, if you really wished for a fic so angst that it would be a trauma on the reader, well, you succeeded with me.
Kinda long comment, I know. But I don't think I'd be able to tell you how I felt about it under any other circumstances, so deal with it.
~ Sincerely, Birbir <3
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Gurl what's gotten into you suddenly
Seriously, though, amazing comment.
The name of the story you've mentioned was "Broken Mirror", if I remember it correctly. And it really did hit pretty hard to me. Knowing that I succeeded in the emotions makes me happy. Just keeping telling your opinions however you want, I'd be more than glad to read 'em ;)
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idk gurl
I started writing this all of a sudden.
ig I will read stories at least five times before commenting now lol