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Rainbow Dash was at Twi's house one day, but a spell go wrong gives her... a horn? Knowing Dash's personality everypony wonders if she's going to destroy Equestria with stunts, Go insane like Nightmare Moon, use her hefty powers for good or be mentally broken down and banished (MOOON!).
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I started reading it, I got confused. Not trying to be mean
Good story, but the "Twilight Spell Goes Wrong" is a little overdone... Just Saying
Also, it goes way too fast. WAY TO FAST. Not to be mean. It's a good story - Just fast and short.
It... needs work. Not terrible, but kind of... hard to read. At least, maybe thats just me?
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That's okay. I'm not a very good writer anyways.
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I'm a beginner, And I'm not very good at writing yet... sooo that's kinda why.... And trust me.. it's not just you... I need to be a bit more organized.
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Thank you! I know I really need to work on this. And I like when people put suggestions out, just not when they're rude. Which yours isn't.
I kinda really need to fix this and work on transitions and crap like that. Thanks for the comment, too
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In a good way, hopefully?
This seems more like an outline of a story than a real story. You should stop at the point you're currently at, and then go back to fill in the blanks; then you can move on to more chapters. I can understand you wanting to get this done and over with, but you really shouldn't post chapters that aren't really ready yet.
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That's what's happening now.
I almost shout OH WHAT?OH S**T!
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You don't like it i'm guessing...
That's okay!
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Add this here for more view and stuff
This could use a bit of editing
I'll help if you'd let me
Wut?
I have no idea what happening here
*blink blink* uh ok?