The crew of the UNSC stealth prowler "Bayou" crash land on a mysterious, planet after their ship is disabled by an unknown force. Led by their captain "Crawfish" they will either get off the planet peacefully, or go home in body bags.
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Whats with all the thumb downs?
Come on Spike, we're going to miss the meteor shower
I'm FUCKING SICK OF THAT LINE IN THE HALO CROSSOVERS!! IS THE EQUIVALENT TO AN ARROW TO THE KNEEE!!!
however, im going to give it a chance
1487824 sorry about that
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dont worry :P
1487856 so what do you thibk of the story
1488319
mmm it's good actually, but i cant give u a full feed-back because it's just 1 chapter, but i like it so far :P
(P.D will you introduce Spartans ??)
1488342 i already did
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(P.D in what year is taking place this history? like 2552 or...)
1488366 maybe a week or two after thehuman covanent war ended
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ohhh so no master chef
SLOW DOWN. MORE DETAIL. LESS CLICHE, PREDICTABLE SCENES! I feel like I JUST started reading and its over! (the first chapter anyway)
1489117 ya i do that in alot of my stories i keep trying to shake it
Seems alright, other than the overused meteor shower this seems like my type of story. Also the chapter seems a bit rushed, but it's only the first chapter.
Sir we have ponies
1494337 i take it you like that ,ine
1495042
yes I did like that part very much
even for the first chapter this story is already turning out great, I'm loving it
1495070 thanks i am already planing future chapters
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Great, I can't wait
1: Crawfish, your an asshole
2: Forerunners? Sweet.
What I was expecting warthogs to blow shit up! Oh well spartan will have to do.
1524926 well you cant fit a mongoose let alone a warthog in a stealth rowler. I was expecting soome hate for what i did to the Mane 6.
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damn. And as for the mane six..... oh well
yay
I find myself confused when reading some sections of this story. Regardless, pretty nice story. I love how you handled the forerunner/pony lore.
1673580 thanks.
Celestia be all Whaaaaaaaaa...
i love it!!! moreee feed meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I cant wait for the next chapter, and see what happens to the forerunner
That was fucking epic
RIP in Peace story
Short super epic story, it shame that there no more update.
God!! I hate all these fantastic stories "ON HIATUS" for ages. I wish many of them would get off their butts and finish these great stories. I think that FIMFICTION should start a policy that ONLY completed stories be submitted !!!