This story is a sequel to One Feather of a Fetish
The on-going romps of the perverted little Featherweight continues when his parents vists an old friend in Canterlot. He comes along to the explore the amazing surroundings of the massive town... just imagining which beatuiful mares or fillies would pose for his enjoyment.
However... his main yet possibly most difficult target... lies inside of the Canterlot Palace.
With this story, the perversion has been DOUBLED!!!
Both separate arts are not mine, but the combination is.
Chapters (6)
Finally, it's done! What happens next?
Well all I can say is that we wont be seeing Celestia nor Luna just yet.
I want your cover image so badly!
Hell ya he back
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The princess art is not mine and the Featherweight image was cut from a separate art. Thought of this combination myself.
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Awesome combination, I never tought it was cut.
Still want it badly!
This is delicious! /mbison
Will read later
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A little error I found: ... I bowed down in front of her and raised my (hands) while telling her, ...
Replace it with hooves and I haven't seen any mistake.
Warning! Warning! Laughter containment unit is broken and about to explode! If you don't want to die laughing run and don't read this chapter.
Bronydragon
This reminds me of a certain shitty cook who has experienced many similiar adventures...hmmm
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That's what this story is
Keep it up my friend
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He should work for Playboy!
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Maybe when he is older
Featherweight's beginning to scare me
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Is he; well he is a 9 year old with a huge photo fetish. So, I must be doing a great job!
That lucky bastard. Good for him. Plus some Sapphire Shores and Photo Finish love, which is nice.
Sir or madam,
Firstly, it's "ma'am", not "mam".
Second, for the love of God, stop making Featherweight say "OMG". It doesn't even make sense, since their god is Celestia.
Third,
Legal. Make it legal.
Lastly, phones haven't been shown to exist in Equestria.
I know it seems like I'm bitching up a storm, but I still liked this.
I'm holding back my laughters right now.
This chapter was just too awesome and too funny.
More of it, if you don't mind.
Dragon
My moustaches I give zem to joo!
Great one. I can't wait for another chapter!
Commence read.
OC's everywhere.
Now what will Featherweight try to attempt?
Filthy, depraved, disgusting.... Please continue!
I wonder if he'll ever get a high powered telescope lens and put it on the camera.
Aww, no butt-fun with the Princesses.
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Nothing actually, but... he's in for a little surprise.
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He wanted to, but he just couldn't do it.
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Well YOU better make it happen, sonny!
Absolutely no insult to young Featherweight, but he's reminding me more and more of those kids from Milk Money. And when Nostalgia Critic has decided that one of them is growing up into Denny from The Room, that's not a good sign.
And as long as the topic's on Milk Money: SO'OP!
Reading Chapter 3 of One Feather of a Fetish: Adventures in Canterlot.
A mini-story by Chuck Baleigh
I awoke in the morning, as is usual, and trudged to my computer, mustering up all the energy I could. Waking up in the morning sucked, y'know? I did my usual business on the inter-web, and then came to FIMFiction. Logging in, I moved my cursor over to the dashboard button and gave a click. There were the favorites updates, and the top one was One Feather of a Fetish: Adventures in Canterlot.
"Oh boy, it updated? Let's go read it," I thought aloud. Moving my cursor again, I gave a click on the mentioned story and its new chapter. "All right, let's see what happens next!"
I read.
Then found my mind screaming in agony.
"TYPOS! GRAMMAR ERRORS! OH GOD THEY'RE EVERYWHERE!"
The End
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Wow...
I think I'll proofread it again later.
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Looked in my favourites after a long time of being absent, seeing your story updated, reading it.
Falling off my chair rolling on the ground laughing my ass off spilling my drink knocking over a lamp and banging my head against the door.
Or short: Fomcrotglmaosmdkoalabmhatd.
And that was only the first time. I think I fell off my chair laughing 6-7 times if I counted right.
You sir are doing a great job with this story.
But there is one thing bothering me. How in the name of Tartarus am I going to get that ridicously huge smile out of my face?
Looking forward for new chapters.
Dragon
I'm really digging Silver Dusk. She seems like a lot of fun.
ohhhh damn........please...YES!
Commence read.
Silver Dusk seems nice.
Now what will you do Luna?
I guess the question is what targets are left after bagging the ultimate princess trifecta?
I'm torn on the mater of Silver Dusk
on one hand I really like the character and she was well executed, on the other hand she seems a little pedophileish which makes me want to violently break every bone in her body
all in all this was my favorite chapter so far also is this the end or are you going to stretch it to include less common characters like Chrysalis, Nightmare moon, or an alternate universe female version of featherweight?
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This is technically the last chapter; all that is left is an Epilouge.
I'm continuing to brainstorm to decide whether or not to do another random story of more of Featherweight's encounters, but this is the end... for now.
Secret buttfun
Just...please, go back and re-read this.
Also, you don't end a question with ";" you end it with "?", even if the speaker isn't actually done speaking.
You've left out plenty of words that make sentences incomplete.
And:
Hooves.
Oh good lord...Luna's going to take pictures of drunk Celestia for Featherweight, isn't she?
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Ah damn you, it was one of best comedy what i read lately xD (Only miss Chrysalis and it will be all of royalty )
Well it had to end sometime. Good job!
Saw update of this story. AAAAAAAW YEEEEEEEEAH!!!!!
Also saw it is completed. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Please make another one of those. They are so damn funny and kind of cute. I'm still holding my sides from the laughing and am daaaawing still.
So please please please pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase continue with your Featherweight stories.
Dragon
Commence read.
Objective Complete.
Now to wonder what things Luna was up to. Drugging her sister and doing things to take pictures to a youth.
Good for you Featherweight.
I like this story. Is there a prequel of his adventures in Ponyville?
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check out my page!
Yes there is;
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Ideas are still flowing through my head, but there might be another one down the road. For now though, Featherweight's pervetish romps end.
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Grammar is a bitch, huh?
Anyways, good as always.