Scootaloo likes to brag. She likes to tell stories about how brave she is, how she isn't afraid of anything.
But when her friends don't buy her stories, she finds herself in the Everfree, looking for a flower to prove her word.
The Nightmare Night is getting closer and the forest is even darker and scarier. And as Scootaloo notices that she's not alone, things start to go downhill.
A lie has it's sanctions.
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Okay. Time to make some stuff clear.
Ain't I supposed to be writing The Fall? Yes.
Why am I writing this? EQD Nightmare Night fic competition. I got an excuse to write something with Slendy and I took the chance.
This was done in a rush. I found out about the competition yesterday (22nd)...
And I guess that that's it. I hope you manage to enjoy it!
Scootaloo is screwed... why have you done this...
But in all seriousness, an excellent story for it's genre. I'll admit I'm not a big fan of Dark stories like this, and there will definitely be some people out there who enjoy it.
Also, give Scootaloo this 'get well' card from me.
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Well, I can't write a Nightmare Night fic that's funny. The rules say so.
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, especially when I only had a day or so to plan and write. If I would have found out about the competition earlier, this could be even better.
I'll try my best to deliver your card!
1497803 Ooooo, an Op story! This'l be fun. By the way, I, just gonna plug myself here and say that I made my first YouTube video.
It's really just a test of the recording software that i just downloaded, but I do have a fun reaction to Mr. Slendy popping up.
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Please do. If she's... y'know... alive and stuff...
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So that's what my YouTube has been trying to say...
I better go check it out. I found some time and the next meeting with some kind of a doctor is in ~2hours. I have to get to the bus station an hour before the meeting is, so basically an hour to spend freely.
And yeah, I should be writing The Fall, the story that I'm going to publish after The Fall and stuff, but I spent my free time writing this.
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I'll have to see about that. Slendy is a sneaky guy, you never know where he is...
But yeah, I'll try my best!
1503115 NO REGRETS!
*after reading*
OP! I'm slightly ashamed of you. Stealing The Legitist's story? Well, I guess you'reimproving on it. Carry on.
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Gotta go, doctor waiting.
1503310 Good luck, I guess.
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Meh, I guess it went well. He just told me the possible cases.
Best case scenario:
I have a little something (Seriously, I can't understand fancy doctor-speak) in my knee and it can be scooped out during the endoscopy. Knee should be fixed and I would walk well again in a month.
Worst case scenario:
I either have a cyst or a very bad problem with the knee's ligaments. Either way, a surgery is necessary.
If it's the cyst, they will just remove it and possibly insert some titanium to support my knee. From my earlier experiences I can assume that I should be walking and hopefully running normally in a 8 months-year. Though, I'm still recovering from the hip surgery, so I can't be sure.
If it's the ligaments, things are bad. My dad had the same thing in both knees. He was unable to bend them almost at all and from what I've heard, the pain was horrible. He had a surgery and got an artificial joints to replace and support the bad areas of the knees. I remember seeing him in the hospital bed, complaining about how even the painkillers the doctors inserted to your spinal cord didn't do anything. He still can't walk completely painlessly and normally, and it has been ~3 years. And he does everything in order to fix it and strengthen the knees.
Of course there are other options, but these are just the best and worst.
Two weeks and I should find out what they will do.
1514494 Fingers crossed (for I don't have hooves) for a best case scenario.
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Same here.
Fingers crossed for two weeks. Gonna affect my gaming...
1515512 Yeah, maybe not for the WHOLE 2 weeks.
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I think I can afford taking some breaks.
And I even might find some time to write tonight. The finale is now at ~5k words and I have inspirational music playing on the background.
And when that gets a bit repetitive,
1515820 >20 hours later
Let's listen to it again!
1517072
Yup!
Battlefield has always had an amazing music. Examples:
-> 0:20 =
And of course the classic.
1517132 I remember trying to listen to the first one for as long as possible back when I played BC2
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Yes, I remember trying something like that, too.
And the feeling when, for example, Port Valdez rolled up on the map list and you could see the loading screen and hear the first sounds of this, there was no going back. Simply
Great times...
1520159 Indeed.............RANDOM MUSIC TIME!
It creates a certain... mood, does it not?
>Slendy appears behind
>Has 6.5 long Matrix-style kung-fu fight with Slendy
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Well, you got something to brag with. Usually Slendy gets tired after two hours.
Interesting. Incomplete.
Are you going to kill Scoots? I will be pleased if you do.
Still, I have noticed that many fanfics about MLP involve Scootaloo being killed. It seems we all hate her.
Hmm. That may be why the Scootaloo emoticon is an angel. You know, a dead thing.
Anyway, I really came here to tell you to get back to The Fall, but then, being the compulsive reader I am, I read this. Now I like it.
Now I am torn between telling you to finish The Fall and demanding that you finish this.
TOO MANY CHOICES!!!
Sigh.
Will there be gore?
Awaiting more.
And, as always, FUZZY!!! ---->
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Uh, wait what incomplete?
*Goes to see the story description.*
Well, this was originally intended to be a one-shot, but I think I could do chapter two...
As soon as I started thinking about it, ideas are starting to pop up. Well, I guess it could be acceptable.
But if I still am going to do it, it's going to take time. The Fall and the endless meetings with the doctor/investigations/MRIs/X-rays are effectively taking up my time.
And if you want a little update on it, the finale is at 7,000 words. It's going to be big, just as I promised.
And yes, if I finish this, there will be gore. I can't see any other way
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YAY! A chapter two!
Why so many doctor appointments?
As for The Fall, so you have about 7000 words, eh?
And when I am 
, most people run away. Some end up 
*Thinks of the about 250000 words on the read later list*
Meh, who needs sleep? Gore is good. Gore makes me
TEE HEE!!!
Ok, I need to eat less sugar. BUT IT IS SO YUMMY!!!
Ok ta ta for now!
1521145 Wait, shit. I forgot to add MINUTE to 6.5
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Well, might as well explain to you too.
So, I have been having these nasty knee pains for the last ~two months.
After trying to tolerate them for ~two weeks, I went to see a doctor due to the fact the pain was just getting worse and worse.
Well, the doctor said that it was possibly just a RSI and sent me off with a week of rest. I tried to tell him that it had been like this for long, but no use.
The week (and an extra one,) passed by and the pain was just getting worse and worse. About three weeks ago I started having these times when I couldn't even walk normally. That's when I decided that I should go see a better doctor.
The best solution was to go to a bigger city about 200km away from my home. When I got to the doctor and told him about it, he immediately said that it was no RSI and that they'd need to take MRI and possibly X-Ray as soon as possible.
Well, it took some time for them, but finally, last week, I got the first pics taken. I don't know what there is, I have no idea when I'll get that info, but the doctors just keep on taking some more pics and investigating the knee. They told that the results would come in 1-2 weeks (from today)
The best case scenario, without them looking at the pics, is that it's just something I didn't quite catch, something about a fold. If this is the case they will do an endoscopy and I should be officially all right a month after it.
The worst case scenario would be that it's either a cyst or a very bad problem with the knee's ligaments. Either way, a surgery is necessary.
If it's the cyst, they will just remove it and possibly insert some titanium to support my knee. From my earlier experiences I can assume that I should be walking and hopefully running normally in a 8 months-year. Though, I'm still recovering from the hip surgery, so I can't be sure.
If it's the ligaments, things are bad. My dad had the same thing in both knees. He was unable to bend them almost at all and from what I've heard, the pain was horrible. He had a surgery and got an artificial joints to replace and support the bad areas of the knees. I remember seeing him in the hospital bed, complaining about how even the painkillers the doctors inserted to your spinal cord didn't do anything. He still can't walk completely painlessly and normally, and it has been ~3 years. And he does everything in order to fix it and strengthen the knees.
Of course there are other options, but these are just the best and worst.
Oh boy do I know that feel. Gore + tiredness =
And yes, sugar is good for
Then we get 
+ 
And you know what's going to happen.
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Oh, explains stuff...
And yes, I know that feel...
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O_O
Well then. I wish you a speedy recovery. Take your time on the stories, spend more time healing.
I hope you get better soon!
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Thanks, I hope it too!
Thanks for caring!
1522560 That feel when you
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Yes.
The feel when your palm is getting closer the your face.
The feel when your palm is almost there.
The feel when your palm connects with your face.
The feel when you do it a bit too hard, effectively smacking yourself in the face.
The feel when you fall unconscious due to the punch.
*Liked*
What is it with you and Slenderman and the Everfree?!
Awesome writing though, I can see your improvement in this. Much fewer mistakes and much better description and what not than your earlier writings.
Looking forward to the next chapter(s).
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Slenderman and a scary forest. It's just natural!
I mean, he can't live in Pinkie's attic, can he?
Wait...
And yes, even I can see it. But it might be that this was meant to participate an EQD writing competition. Or it might be that I was relieved to write something else than The Fall. But nobody knows...
Well, I think I better keep on writing then. You should expect updates to happen soon enough!
Meanwhile, have fun with Derpy!
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LAVA LAMP!!!!
I have a lava lamp... It's purple too. How did you know that...?
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I'd rather not tell. That information might have some unwanted effects on people.
And I happen to have a red lava lamp. It doesn't work, though, but I still have it!
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Lol, okay.
Sorry to hear that, but hey, it's still a lava lamp. Possessing one automatically makes you 20% cooler.
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Exactly!
Ever tried taking the goo out?
Don't.
Well, another Slendy story, another ending where he gets away with it. Seriously, there is no other way to end these. At least I can't think of one.
And the amount of chills running up my spine when I was writing this... Not too good.
But anyways, I'd like to inform you that this is my last Slendy story before The Arrival gets officially published for downloading. After that, if I manage to do something with it, I will make a story based on it. So, I guess I'm going to find some other subjects.
The next story I will publish will be [Romance][Slice Of Life][Comedy(?)]. Yes, you saw it. Comedy(?) and Romance. I'd like to note that this is purely for the lulz, I'm not a romantic writer, at least for what I know, so prepare to have a good laugh at the mistakes I do.
The current deadline of chapter one is before Christmas. Although I have it ready already, I think I'll keep from posting stories for a while (Read Later and damn good Favorites are stacking up...) But if I get too much requests, I may change my mind.
Anyways, I guess this post is long enough. I hope you enjoyed this little Nightmare Night -fic and pretty much thanks for reading!
See you around!
Great detail, huge improvement from you other stories, just a few typos here and there, and the as's are in mass numbers, try to fix that if you can maybe.
Looking forward to your next tale when you get the chance to put it up. Need to get work on my next chapter too
Btw, the color for comedy, really damn painful and couldn't read it without highlighting it. Just sayin.
Okay. That's all. Bye now.
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I'm well aware of the fact I never should write dead tired, but meh, what you gonna do? Least I didn't put in any Gak jokes...
And now it's time for the "morning after"-proofread. Aaaaaand it's done.
I'll see what I can do. Reduced the amount of favorites by 4 chapters yesterday and I'm way ahead the schedule. Hopes high 'n' stuff.
Yes, I noticed that as well. Why make a tag yellow? Painful to read...
Same to you, I'll see you around. If not earlier, then when you just manage to put the next chapter up!
Greetings! Your self-appointed unofficial editor has arrived! I found three times when I think you used the wrong word. Here they are.
“Fatal” means lethal, deadly. If that night had been fatal, Scoots would not be alive. I think you meant “fateful.”
SomePONY. Tsk tsk, not again!
I'm just teasing. Kind of. 
“Fillies and foals” would be “girls and children.” “Fillies and colts” would mean “girls and boys,” which I assume is what you meant.
Anyway, I had to giggle at the ending. It was just so CUTE!!!
are guts, gore, blood, death and the like. 
Dear Luna, my mind is too twisted. Really, I could give "Cupcakes" Pinkie a run for her bits.
Other than that, I loved this!
But wait?
1592254 Romance? And you told me on my story that Pinkie is in it! So, is it a Pinkie romance? I don't really mind the comedy or slice of life, but I only read a few romance stories. Most of them Flutterdash/Rainbowshy. Whatever you want to call it. The only things I really
One last thing. FUZZYNESS!!!
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Three? I proofread this, or I think so, pretty carefully, but that's what you get for proofreading your own stories... Time to fix some mistakes!
Yup, you're right. Fateful is the right word. Fixed!
Okay, as this is the (I'm not counting) time one of these slips past my eyes, I can't put any excuses here anymore. My bad, fixed and trying to be more and more careful about that.
The third one is a bigger mistake, also mine. But hey, foals, colts, they sound just like the same! I mean, the pronunciation is almost identical! Fixed.
Cute endings for the win!
Ooh! That would be one heck of a show. And a twisted mind is a good thing. I mean, we who think twistedly have twice as much fun as the "normally thinking" people!
Yes. That's just what I feel. "Am I seriously doing this?" But yes. I think I am. Nope, it's not a Pinkie romance. Pinkie is just trying to help (hilarity should ensue) in her own way. I'm not going to spoil more so you wont know half of the story by seeing this comment.
Yes, true there. Gore and stuff are way over the romantic genres, but I'm giving romance a shot. No worries, after that I should be back to writing something gore-y for you to enjoy.
And yes. FUZZYNESS INDEED!
1614467 I find romance hard to write. I almost never write it. Yet, somehow, the only two stories I have on this site both have the romance tag. I noticed that the other day. I said to myself "who are you and what have you done with the real me?" But then I say that my second made someone cry, so I felt a little better. Celestia, sister of Luna what is wrong with me? Oh well. I'm going to try and write the most depressing thing I can now. I need a due date... hmmm. I'm deciding to do this as I type, so I have no plans yet. Well, I'm camping this weekend, so I won't be able to write then so lets say I need 5000-10000 words by the end of the month. That sounds good.
OK! Thanks for letting me use this comment page as a planning/rant place.
Bye bye for now!
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For me, all writing is easy as long as I have an idea that I like. Though, some ideas are easier than others, and romantic things (as I'm not the most romantic person) are not the easiest.
I like the part where you said "the most depressing thing". That sounds good! And 5000-10000 words! Now you got me waiting for it!
Hey, whenever I post something, feel free to raid it as much as you want. I ain't going to say anything important after the main text/first comment. Everything posted by me after that is either rambling, planning stuff or just enjoying the company of you people!
I'll see you around! You'll find me commenting and pushing the green thumb-thingy (and most likely the golden star-thingy) when you get the next story up!
1614894 I noticed how this was rated 'everyone'. Tsk, tsk, tsk, OP.
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Well, isn't this kinda everyone-friendly? I mean, look at my older stories rated teen for gore and this one only had a single tentacle killing a single filly without torturing her too much...
I know, I know, I'm bad at putting age-ratings on things. But it's just so hard