Ponyville gets assigned a Royal Canterlot Guard, posted by Shining Armor himself. The mane six seem to take to the new addition to Ponyville well (Pinkie Pie even throwing him a party), but it soon becomes obvoius that his stay won't just be a vacation from Canterlot, as a shadow grows from the Everfree Forest. Twilight and friends, new and old, must stand up to this evil for the protection of Ponyville.
I was wondering when someone was going to make a story like this continue
A TwilightXOC, this is relevant to my interests. Will track to see if you end up Mary Sueing, but this seems promising.
Seems interesting enough, though I would recommend slowing down a little. You're pacing this a bit fast.
Good fic- I second the motion to slow down a tad.
But honestly, I think it's really interesting and well written thus far!
'nuff said. Very good chapter! A tad short....but good!
I wonder why Arrow didn't mention that he was meeting the Holders of the Elements of Harmony.
KNIGHTS of Equestria, you know...