I wish I could just finish all the half-done stories I've got backlogged.
Trixie Lulamoon, she thought she had left all of Ponyville behind her. However, she cannot escape her past. When Twilight tries to jog her memories to remember where she got her injuries, it takes her back much, much farther than she could imagine. Will she be able to handle her past as well as the present?
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Should that be "She looked up at the moon and cried,"?
It's not greatly interesting. The violence is what interested me the most. Mostly because I don't read gore fics, but the Constello (great name) bit through me off from it and I felt it losing focus. I do like Trixie a lot though and it's nice to see a fic where there isn't the "trixie bones the ever loving shit out of twilight" premise written all over it.
Applejack, Rarity and Rainbow Dash now only tracked down Trixie, but beat her so bad she has amnesia. Unless those three are going to get justice for what they did to her, I am not interested. I like Trixie too much for that.
Hmmm this is good I like
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Thank you!
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I still have more things to do with this story. And thanks for actually liking the oc I made. You have no idea how many prototypes I went through before I came up with Constello.
1685349 The story also reminds me of how the playable Glory of heracles Character Eris got Amnesia by being immortal and surviving an explosion that made a entire city a smoking crater
1685349 I'm sure. It's just not one of the pieces where the style just sucks you in and screams brilliance. Maybe even just not in the beginning.
I speak from experience...
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I get that, I'm not trying to make a masterpiece, but try not to dissapoint.
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Also, reading your comment. The word "sucks" stood out and I saw that and got really worried.
It's all good now that I actually read the entire comment carefully. True story.
So she is going to keep having flashbacks. Okay. I'll keep an eye on this (I'm a sucker for Trixie flashbacks/friendshipping.) I still want AJ, RD and Rarity to get theirs in the end.
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Don't worry, she still has to get her memories back. I haven't forgotten about those ponies.
Hold up, what the buck, they chased her down, beat her so hard that she gained amnesia, left her for dead, cursed at her- THESE PEOPLE CAN NOT be
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Look. There's OOC, and then there's bullshit. Pleases, explain to me how and why? Because, I'm sorry, I don't understand WHY!!
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This stuff will be explained in a future chapter. Trust me, I was aware that someone would call me out on this so I prepared for it. Don't worry.
Aside from that little confusion, what did you think of the story overall? I aim to please. I want to make sure I did my job.
this is getting inyeresting but make it longer
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Don't worry about that. It will be.
I sense another flashback coming. I noticed how quick Rainbow left when she realized Trixie had amnesia. Probably to warn Rarity and Applejack.
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Twilight is going to have to do something about this flashbacks that Trixie seems to have at random times. Who knows what can happen if Trixie has one in the middle of something. She could end up getting hurt. I like how quick you came out with this update by the way. I guess that's why I like shorter chapters...they tend to come out faster.
Looks like a very bad flashback is about to occur. I see Applejack and Rarity were quite nice, despite being embrassassed. I wonder why?
I can't wait for Trixie to remember who assulted her.
Ouch. Ouch! OUCH!! So that's why she always proclaim herself to be the best. In any case, I wonder how Twilight will react to this story. She is seriously going to have to do something about these 'random' flashbacks.
Feels
Apple Jack & Rarity are conspiring something !
Any idea when we will get another chapter?
So, this is it?
Trixie gets beat so bad, she lost part her memory and possibly had a concussion. Yet, she apologizes to the ones who beat her down? Twilight doesn't have much of a reaction to finding out her friends did this to somepony? I really hope there is more to this, elsewise, I have just been let down.
3152024 don't worry about this. There is an alternate ending in the works that'll be much more interesting. Trust me when I say this, Trixie will get her revenge.
And sorry whoever posted recently, I didn't mean to delete your comment. :/
3174146 Don't worry, I am currently working on an alternate ending that will probably change the overall rating of this fic from everyone to teen, or maybe even mature if I decide to be as graphic as I originally planned. Please, do not worry, the three will get what's coming to them.
3175668 my god, this story is starting to remind me of what they did with mass effect 3...
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I second these two, you can't just beat someone to unconsciousness, provoking an concussion with amnesia and then act as innocent just for said someone to apologizes to you.
I just hope that there's a fair distribution of flank kicking in the alternate ending.
Constello Lulamoon is easily the best OC I've seen in a while! I love how its not another sob story about Trixie being abused (not that those are bad, they just get old) and its a tale of a little filly *presumably still a blank-flank* that lost her parents, ate garbage to live, by dumb luck was selected as a volunteer for the show, the kind stallion takes her in because he felt bad, and their bond *presumably* continues to grow. Believe it or not: this backstory is actually not too far out there for me..... its still a little cheezy, but its well made up for by being different from the rest of the backstories that other artists create (speaking from the heart, anything creative is art.... even fanfiction
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So much for something different.... saw that death coming..... but I hoped there would be an attempt at something less cliche.... oh well, still a really great OC and backstory!
Great story so far, I love it! Tricia needs more of a back ground and I wish this was it
The feels I needs them, Plse write moar chapters!
So...
Is this story dead or forgotten?