1789463 I take the big "grammar nazi" sign as a compliment. Yes, i am striving to get my grammar prefect. Unfortunately some parts tend to slip.
Yes, there was an error there. the first of all; youres is supposed to be youre's. Secondly; you'res isn't even a word. You need to completely re-write the sentence, but it was a clever attempt at a word play Don't ask me how to fix it, i can't seem to find an answer for that one
A little early release on this one, but dammit I'm inpaciant.
I read the first chapter when it was originally released, but haven't checked back in for a while. Second chances are a beautiful thing.
1789261 aww, thanks for giving it another try.
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My pleasure. Every starting writer/artist should be given more than a few chances.
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I see you used one of my suggestions
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I take the big "grammar nazi" sign as a compliment. Yes, i am striving to get my grammar prefect. Unfortunately some parts tend to slip.
Yes, there was an error there. the first of all; youres is supposed to be youre's. Secondly; you'res isn't even a word. You need to completely re-write the sentence, but it was a clever attempt at a word play
Don't ask me how to fix it, i can't seem to find an answer for that one
To give everyone a teaser for the next chapter (but not the last) I can tell you that it will contain a threesome, but I will not say with who.
1789581 I'm very patent but Its killing me to read the next chapter. BTW I love the story and I don't usually say that to people.
i demand a sequel
Loved every second of it, bro.
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Your avatar is what happened if she was caught!
1789317 Yeah, your title suggestion was better than what I had
1790501 As I said, there will be a new chapter soon
“Are you some kind of performer?” Scootaloo yells from the end.
THATS LATER TONIGHT!!!
BIW CHICKA BOW WOW
Wow, almost a hundred like This got way more popular than I expected, thanks for all the support so far
I would like to thank everypony who has favorite my story and I'm sorry for not responding to all of them
Damn I really like a girl when they get like this :3 a LOT!
~FiBP