Twilight Sparkle had to use King Sombra's Dark Magic to solve various puzzles. She claims that Celestia showed her how, but how is she perfect at the spells at the first go? Something stinks of a nefarious plot....
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I hope everpony likes this! I had this idea after watching the Season Three premier, and it wouldn't go away until I wrote it! I'm sorry if the writing isn't up to your standards, but I'll appreciate and constructive criticism!
Also romance for eventual shipping.
Chapters (1)
Another dark magic fic. Wonderful.
Love me a good corrupt Twilight fic. Do continue.
~Skeeter T L
1640506 I, for one, welcome our new fimfiction trend
1640541 I'm not against it, but it's gonna go down so quickly.
1640547 TWILIGHTALICORNTWILIGHTVAMPIRETWILIGHTCHANGELINGR63TWILIGHTDARKMAGIC
There was far more but whatever.
1640590 It's sad because I wanted to use a lot of those trope.
WAIT... I'LL USE ALL OF THEM
1640599 Something I summed up some time ago:
This was before "Luna
masturbatesY with X" trend.1640623 Oh good, that last one ties everything together.
A bit rushed.... however, it's not bad. I'll like to see where this goes if it's anything different from the usual "corrupt Twilight" fics
Interesting so far, I look forward to reading more.
Awesome story, love a good Corruption Twilight fic.
1640506 1640541 Another trend is 'What if the Pinkie Twilight sent back was the REAL one?!'
1642274 That's gonna be huge for like three days, then die.
1642279 yup. I've already seen about ten already.
MOAR
I like where this is going....
good start a bit rushed maybe slow it slightly.
faved and thumbed want moar
1642274 Actually, the most annoying recent one is "I woke up as a pony" //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
I really hate it.
it's a little rushed and short and I feel there should be a little more, "time taken" with Twilight steady corruption as opposed to her just suddenly wanting to trip kids even if she feel guilty afterwards also considering you'd think she might or Spike might mention these dreams to someone.
Besides that though I really like the idea, everything is part of Sombras plan Twilight will almost certainly go evil will she just be opposed or will they fuse ETC? I look forward to finding out I'll fave and follow for now
Sombra and corrupt Twilight, two best things in one fic? Christmas already!
1645526 I know! I haven't seen those together yet, so I just had to pair them!
1644020 1643605 1641137 Everyone tells me all my stories are rushed...
I just love getting to the action, so it tends to get rushed...
well i can relate to that lol trying to space things out is fucking painfull lol.
I'll keep an eye on this. I agree with everyone else to, try to pace things out to give the reader time to adsorb just what the hell's going on. That, and, this is just personal preference, but the chapter looked weird to me with the entire thing centered and with so many spaces between paragraphs. It felt like I was reading a badly written poem with no rhymes and it still told me what was happening, not showing me.
If you're confused by the show vs tell concept, click here.
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This was fantastic! Keep it up!
I like this, but what is everything in the center?
P.S. Whens the next chapter?
You should also add this picture to the end. th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/315/4/c/king_sombra_by_izeer-d5kojaa.png
1646058 Not exactly. Though I'm sure you the first one to try it after the season 3 premier. th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2012/319/4/1/one_taste_of_power____by_videogamedude1000-d5l21cw.png
I'm in love with this story, you should be proud to write such masterpiece. Please don't give up <3
When is the next chapter? I've been waitin' for 2 weeks now.
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Sorry, I tend to lose inspiration and motivation pretty quickly...
My only finished stories are one-shots.
Plus I've been swamped by homework. I'll try, but I'm not sure when I'll have the time. I haven't even started my science fair project, and it's almost two weeks overdue
This looks great, but all text centralized throws off my reading. I had to tread carefully to ensure I don't miss anything.
Maybe I didn`t read any news and I`m just stupid, but will this be continued?
I really enjoyed it and would love to read more
YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!
i have been waiting forever!!
UPDATE SOON!!
When is new chapter???
if I don't get new chapter sooN!!
I will go
Can you continue your story please
UPDATE!
i need to know what happens. Ive been waiting forever.
when are you posting the next? 
When are you going to make a new chapter?!!!!
PLEASE MAKE MOOOOOOORRE!!!!!!! Please
Hurry someone get me the Inspiration manefestation book!Because we need to inspire her!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is, if you don't mind
Please Please Please Continue This! :D
Continue!!!Pretty,pretty please??
*Takes deep breath* COMMENCE THE POKING. *pokes* update. *pokepoke* Please.
id love to see you do more with this. it kept me reading this till the end. you have to finish this man. To qoute Rarity: You must YOU MUST!.
This is a nice story.
ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE READ!
10/10 on the story
What an amazing start! Too bad it’s dead