King Sombra has a few ideas that he wants to go over with his advisor, Shale.
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Short, but entertaining. I like it!
Oh poor Shale, stuck carrying out the orders of an individual who's intellect is but a hundredth of his own.
I like it
Haha, some good one-liners.
I also like this overall depiction of Sombra in general.
Eh, it's kinda vapid. None of the jokes are particularly fresh, and it's just 1000 words of lampooning Sombra's palace design by having it come out of the mouth of a portrayed idiot. Not going to downvote, but, well, eh.
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Nice.
Well, to be entirely honest, I can't blame Sombra...
I would totally build a spiral staircase to screw with people too if I was an evil king...
Do you see this crown?
shale. Shaaaaaaaaale. I have a bitch of an itch in my left ass cheek.
This came to mind when reading this
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That's what I was thinking of when I wrote it. :D
I personally thought his layers and layers of stairs and defenses and stairs and traps and stairs (and did I mention the stairs?) to be pretty clever, but I won't deny that with the whole 'pit in the floor' thing, he isn't exactly a master architect!
1611188 love it. Team four star sre some funny guy's.
So, I'm not against making fun of King Sombra but.. your jokes just don't work. I can tell what you were going for, with his aid's deadpan delivery but you just didn't pull it off. It's not that I think the stairs part of his design was good, it's just the delivery and the fact it's not that funny. Heck, if you're trying to make jokes about the giant hole in the throne room, at least mention the lack of a safety rail and OSHA.
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Yeah, the door that traps you in your worst nightmare and the pressure sensor trapped floor where pretty nice.
And I think the author seriously overestimates how easy it is to destroy ancient magical artifacts.
1749738 Indeed
Hi! I just wanted to let you know I did a dramatic reading of this story with a few other VAs. Thank you for writing such a hilarious story. XD
This is one of the funniest stories I've ever read. :D
That was amazing, hilarious, and short. Good job!
Um, didn't Twilight say Sombra hid the Heart in his tower because he knew most ponies were too scared to enter? And didn't his last trap, um, beat her (making her rely on Spike)?
4395244 Wow! This is the most recognition any of my fics have ever gotten! In fact, I'm pretty sure this is the most recognition anything I've made has gotten. I am honored that someone would make a dramatic reading of something I've written. If I remembered my youtube password, I'd give you a like and subscribe, but... um... I haven't remembered it in about four or five years...
Thank you very much!
Now that's just silly... :P
Totally Sombra on this one. Lol
This is pure brilliance had me laughing so much.... I can never watch those episodes the same again....