The Great Equestrian Picture Book

by Church

Page Twenty-one

So to Sweet Apple Acres, Fluttershy did go,

simply because she wanted to know,

if her friend was still here, if she didn't leave,

and if she could find the relief to believe.

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Comments

[Csquared08]

if her friend was still here, if she didn't leave,

and if she could find the relief to believe.

I feel like the repetition of the "if" phrases would be more effective without the "and," but that's just me.

[Princess Cadence]

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Agreed, it takes away from the anaphora.

[Spleedude]

I looked at the picture and my mind exploded

[Regidar]

That is some fucking beautiful art.