I am just a pony, for a pony is all I can be.
The higher you go, the further you will fall. What happens when the solar princess gets too close to the sun though? All her work laid bare before something she cannot hope to command. All the good and the bad she has done for her entire life. It should prove to be a... painful revelation.
Note: This will be my first real, super serious, stab at something dark, so any help would be great.
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Into The Lair Of The Sun God Pt. I - Dawnbringer
In his fury as Discord's mischief my creator forged
1. At.
Hmm... this relates to your dream mentioned before yes? Hmm... this can be interesting, do go on
1851443 I will indeed go on, it will be painful.
1851446 If by painful you mean some ponies feasting on other ponies with flesh being ripped from their still living bodies, blood dripping from their wounds and forming a puddle of their own blood to lay down in... yeah I should just stop talking...
1851460
That's pretty.. tame actually. Try harder.
Hmmmmm this looks interesting
It's a little confusing. I can't tell if that's intentional or not, as I am also a fan of leveling dialog outside of chronology. Hopefully you'll reveal how the characters got into said situation. Also, that's a lot of stage setting crammed into the prologue.
Epic "Lord of the Rings" opening, btw.
3530134 Thanks an- wait, it seriously took almost a year for someone to pick that out and call me on it?