Trixie is used to picking herself up again, although the Ponyville incident hit her especially hard. Facing starvation and exposure to the elements, can she be saved?
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i am intrigued... must read more
damnit what was spell 25...
apple jack more like apple bitch in this chapter
just one complaint. Internal monolouge like "“As terrible as this might make me” thought Trixie" when somone is saying something inside of there heads it should be written like. " 'As terrubke as this might make me' thought Trixie " ... use ' ' for internal and " " for normal speech..
137499 The mustache spell
137524 You, sir, have helped me out a great deal today. I would also like to say (for both you, and anyone who is reading this) I'm not trying to make Apple Jack out to be the bad guy in the story, it just doesn't seem like she would be very forgiving of Trixie, y'know?
Didn't Trixy tell Luna about her last visit when they met? You know, in ch.1
140464 She did, although she didn't tell Luna who she humiliated.
I'm not going to pretend I did that on purpose, that was completely accidental, thank you for pointing it out
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how can she not be forgiving.. She is the GREAT and POWERFUL TRIXIE! she made a horse sound when saying neigh sayers..
142119 Right, and Apple Jack (to me) seemed to have the biggest problem with Trixie out of any of the mane 6 (Well, Rainbow Dash may have disliked her even more), and Trixie's ego (again, this is my interpretation, although it could very well be wrong) seemed to strike Apple Jack's nerve more than anything else.
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All I heard was that Applejack is going to be The GREAT and POWERFUL Trixxxxxies apprentice? That or Rainbow Dash is in love with trixie... But i mean seriously who doesnt worship trixie.... no really who doesn't I will strike down the Neeeeeigh Sayers
143696Wait, what? Where did you hear this?
Plutonic
"You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means." ~Inigo Montoya
I believe the word you are looking for is platonic. Plutonic refers to igneous rock formed at depth beneath the earth's surface, or pertaining to the god of the underworld. This would have some interesting implications for hugs in relation to either of those.
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I can't believe I did that... Thank you for pointing this out to me, and bonus points for the princess bride reference 
looks great so far
hehehe the mustache spell
Applejack...I'm disappointed in you...
(lol)
From what I've read so far this great! I'll finish it up in the morning
Nevermind couldn't stop this is great I'm definitely going to track this!
Please, continue. I'm interested.
(Sup? -FJ)
1227800 Well, prepare to regret saying that, because I have 7 (maybe 8) chapters up!
Also, did you make your story public?
1227868 Hey man. I have been talking with your brother on funnyjunk, and I am in love with your story. It is very well written, and flows better than most things that I read. You make us care about Trixie, make her a person(or pony), in a way that no other story I have read before has. I salute you.
hey post the other chapters i like it
3542718 Are... are people still reading this? Huh! Well, I've been hearing a lot to revive the fic, so... Why not!