Big Macintosh is finally going to marry Fluttershy, but he doesn't know how he should propose. To figure out how, he asks his three best friends for advice: Caramel, Mr. Cake, and Braeburn. Hilarity ensues when Big Mac tries to propose. Will any of his attempts work? Will Big Macintosh propose to Fluttershy, or will he fail?
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Ahhh I am first to read yay... WILL READ NOW.
HAHAHAHA Poor AJ... Great story though. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
This looks promising, and I like the humor. It flows nicely.
this is exactly as it looks
Good First chapter you have my attention.
Positives: You are able to establish the charters who they are and there relations in between each other, and your promise for good humor is almost guaranteed.
Negatives: Unfortunately I seem to look forward to the misadventures of this group rather than big mac and fluttershy but this is of course the first chapter to establish these characters but this should be resolved in the next few chapters.
Overall positive out looks not to many problems this should be a good Fic.
*yay* fluttermac
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"rat-patooty". I literally laughed out loud.
Great chapter and poor Macintosh (and Fluttershy).
I wanna know who is going to give the next idea to Big Mac... And i fear it will fail horribly too.
Great chapter!
Continuing my criticism from last time here is my new formed opinion.
Positives - You delivered on excellent humor . You took my concern from last time and made it into something good. I do not know if it was intentional but I think you are making your making Carrot, Caramel, and Braeburn the main characters, and have them play off Fluttershy and Big Mac.
Negatives - Hard to spot any but one glaring problem for me any way is that fluttershy is acting some hat out of character for the time line we are in, I am assuming after the episode sonic rainboom but fluttershy seems a little bit to confident. Maybe there is something I missed probably from sort of previous story you wrote. (Checking a few seconds later I found yes I did this means the previous comment is null and void
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Final Thoughts - Great fic so far and is one of the best I've read.
1909359 Thanks for commenting again! Unfortunately, Fluttershy doesn't really do anything important in this fic, so her character doesn't really stand out. I'm sorry if she was out of character.
As for the others, the main character is supposed to be Big Macintosh, but the group's funny antics will still be there. Thanks for the huge compliment! 
Damn it, Carrot! Either Carrot can't spell or Pinkie did something. Also, how did Carrot survive his wife's wrath. Cup Cake is built like a tank, and he is kinda stickish.
1938375 I shall answer your questions for it is the right thing to do!
Carrot put that on the cake because he was singing "Carry On" while putting the message and Cup Cake doesn't hit ponies. Thanks for reading!
1938394
Well Carrot isn't a pony, he's her husband. Big difference. You stop being a person after marriage.
1938420
True, but no violence, it's very rude.
Great idea! I'll have to read this later because I'm really busy today. But thumbs up for now!
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT!
HAHAHAHAHA carry me... classic. Love the story can't wait for the next chapter
Yeah, that ending made me facepalm. I have to say, I wasn't expecting that.
These guys are too much fun. I'm pretty sure that i'm evil for looking forwards to Big Mac's next failure more than his inevitable success.
That would be a very, very interesting wedding.
I'm Back...
Positives: same as last ti.. blah blah blah...
At this point I am just repeating myself but I have no concerns. If I had to say anything I think it is really great
So lets just start a conversation in the comments: if the show's writers wanted to make fluttermac cannon would they use this story?
(note this saying that the show's rating was raised to a y7.)
1945501 Nice to see you again! I would like it if Fluttermac was canon, but I don't mind that it isn't. If it was, it's possible that this story could be used, just changed with minor edits. If they don't, then whatever they do is fine. I'll always love the show.
I know Caramel wants to be with.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! It's like he's ******* dense!!!!
'Cause we got opportunity,
But we'll mess this up royally...
Supply and demand, Flim, Flam. You had the supply, but only one pony had a demand.
And now... Big Mac's idea, amiright?
Aw POOP, you never let us down!
1971106 Eeyup.
Quick next plan!
CURSE YOU FLIM FLAM BROTHERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THis is the most agonizing story I remember reading! Every time I can see a disaster is going to happen. Can't wait to see Big Mac's idea!
Caramel and Derpy?
DO EET! DO EET NAO!!!
I would like to say you are amazing at writing a good comedy. You opened it slow with small joke and then kept slowly getting bigger in the jokes you throw at us. But I do not know how you are going to trump drunk Fluttershy.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
HAHAHA derpy like caramel... derpy likes caramel... nice chapter. Love the inclusion of flim and flam, and there song.
Well, that was utterly adorable.
Applause! Applause! Very sweet end to a very fun fic!
Gotta remember that game myself.
i just .... i just think i might cry its so cuite
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I loved this story. Cute, funny and full of adorableness. I found no errors or other problems. Everyone was in character and FlutterMac for the Win. I loved this! Keep writing, because your really good at it. I enjoyed the read and I'll see you in Brighter Days!
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BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! Lovely ending!
WOW, what a way to end the story... bravo. Many Dawwws have come from this.
1992422 Dawwww, thanks for that video, i haven't heard this song in FOREVER.
WELL... we have reached a great conclusion. Onto the final thoughts.
Positives - A well crafted story with great humor and one of the best fics I have read on this sight so far. (Keeping in mind that I have not read everything on this sight calm down people who are reading this.)
Negatives - I can't even think of one.
I anticipate your next fic.
Also to keep with this series of youtube videos have this
Just finished chapter 3 - and I'm literally wiping tears of laughter off my face
Finally!!!
Nice done!
1992422 Oh my God. I've been looking for that song for 10 fricken years, and because you posted that I finally found it. Thank you! I had no clue it was Enrique Iglasias because I normally don't listen to him.
Good fanfic by the way!
MUFFINS!!!!!
NO IMPROVEMENT NEEDED.