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Doom N Gloom


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An alicorn by the name of Doom N' Gloom arrives in Ponyville after losing all but the most recent of his memories. Not knowing where he came from or, where he is headed, Doom decides to spend the next few days in Ponyville during which he meets Vinyl Scratch. The two fall for each other and seem to have a perfect connection, however matters are complicated as Doom discovers scant details about his past and an old enemy strives to end Doom's life.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/181/9/2/srsly__by_fortressgamer1-d55g6r3.jpg Is this a troll fic or just really really bad there are so many things wrong with this story I can't count them all!?:ajbemused:

This is way better then most alicorn oc fan fictions I've seen.

I would suggest getting an editor or asking a friend to proofread but I don't see anything to terrible.

I thought this was a troll-fic since it is based on an alicorn who doesn't know where he came from, but then I saw the cover picture and thought this might be serious and it was.

First of all, please stahp with the Alicorn. Just.. Stahp.
Second of all, you might want to check Chapter 2's title spelling, cowboy.
Third of all, who made that Cover Art? :derpytongue2:
Fourth of all, I'm going to stop doing this eventually..
Fifth of all, Oh screw this. This is too much.
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This is good, Book, don't you dare use JonTron to insult this!!!:twilightangry2:

Cali, you DO know he can't change it that easily.

go alicorn OCs! :3

we should all combine to form a ulicorn and go and buck things up!

also I wub the idea of special levitation as a magic :3

MOAR!

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