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One night after a crazy Pinkie pie party, the six friends wake up in a forest. They look around to find lots of strange creatures. The friends find a town and almost get mistaken for the local creatures. After a big mix up, the six learn that the creatures are called "Pokemon". Now the set of friends have to find a way back home. The only lead is a local legend, and the knowledge of the champions.
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Very interesting i must see more!
Interesting, but the way you listed who picked what could've been done much, much better. It's better to develop relationships, like scenes showing why they picked said pokemon. If you show it later, that's fine, but that's about the only problem I have with this fic. Two things- show, don't tell, and never skimp on details.
You've stole my title story but my plot instead is Unova region with Nate as an Main character.
1936011
Yeah I know, that's why the next chapter is going to develop the relationships. I wrote the last bit in a hurry due to being up late. (not my best idea)
1936162
Sorry, I can tell you that I had no intention. Besides, it's just a working title. I will most likely change it later once story progresses more and genius strikes.
1935693
Might as well address all three comments so far and say thank you
Nevermind anyway I'm changing my title to Pokemon Multiverse the story is Nate and the ponies travel across dimensions to recruit everyone in order to stop the unknown foe trying to merge their to the real world
I will be following this! Ponies and Pokemon are my two favorite things! Although some of your choices are odd, I was thinking more like
Twilight - Charmander (resembling Spike)
Applejack - Torchic or Tepig? (because they both resemble farm animals)
Fluttershy - Golden Caterpie
Rainbow Dash - Turtwig (good pick btw)
Rarity - Snivy (possibly female and learns attract like Ash's Snivy)
Pinkie Pie - Totodile (resembling Gummy)
Oh wow, I was planning on a pokemon fic, but WAAAAAAAY different than this. And I agree with 1937403 about the choices and 1936011 about the details. Like for my Warriors crossover I didn't go like "Applejack is Applepaw, Pinkie Pie is Pinkpaw, Rainbow Dash is Rainpaw, etc etc."
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Yes i know i wrote the choices quickly. I meant for it to be like they had a split second decision, i need to go back and edit it. Chapter two is going to be set up where they find out what pokemon they grabbed and how they create a bond with them. I will go back and edit after i finish chapter two.
Please bear with me for now
1939127 mmkay, I MIGHT bear with you... If you give me a cookie
Lol, a "town" to Rainbow Dash is 3 houses in the forest. XD
Pokemon and ponies? This could prove interesting to me. I will follow to see where this goes.
The mane 6 in Pokemon world? I was looking for this. It looks promising, but I think you should slow the rythm down a bit, to deepen the characters' thoughs and add more dialogue. As they are at Oak's lab, I can't help but imagine, as they would visit the park in which the professor keeps his trainers' pokemons, Rarity meet a rather enthusiastic Muk...
Hell yes.
In my Story the Cutie Mark Crusaders choose they're Pokémon after Nate captured one of them by events.
Crobat - Scootaloo
Sharpedo - Sweetie Belle
Dophan - Applebloom
Read my blog and comment your reaction don't be shy coward your just not man enough.
1939127
Go to the blog and Group pal lighten up cause X and Y is gonna be here at Oct. 2013
By the way I almost gonna puke if 2012 is gonna kill us due to paranoia and I don't really like BW but I like BW2 version.
1937403
Totally agree with you
Will the elements of harmony be found in several different regions?
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Im not going to give away any spoilers
I was startin to worry that you didn't want to finish this story even thouh it is so good.
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dont worry, i dont forget my creations. it just takes me a while to get stuff done
Have Twi find an Eevee. It would be funny to see her figure out its genetic structure
This is really good, please keep going.
wait until they figure out the "omnivore issue"
From that box he...
They decided...
you might want to... you know, avoid using same words describing same persons.
capital letters, y u no work?
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Thanks for pointing these out. I tend to write in a hurry then leave mid sentence, so I don't usually proof read when I'm done.
omigoshomigomigoshomigoshomigosh!!! i love this!
you sir have successfully combined my two favorite things. bravo and keep adding more chapters!
ah pok'emon so many happy memories
2044310I'm with you there
Okay. Oak freaks out at the Mane Six, but Tracy doesn't? Twilight uses lecture on Professor Oak, and he instantly connects champions with the EoH?
I don't buy it.
And you are really going at a breakneck pace, aren't you? From drugged and disoriented in a forest to Pokemon trainers in a chapter or two seems awful quick.
You clearly recognize the fact that having a talking Pokemon (as Twilight will undoubtedly be viewed as) with Pokemon of her own would be considered a Big Deal. Why are mom and Tracy totally cool with that? Is reality warping around the ponies?
Your prose needs work, but Twilight has no glaring characterization issues. Well done.
Your PoV, third person limited, should stick to the same character in a scene. Don't jump from turtwig to Dash and back unless there's a line break.
Why would Jace wait until now to try and collect the ponies? His group brought them over! Unconscious! Why didn't they do whatever they wanted to do with the ponies before?
Rainbow Dash wouldn't be one to let others fight her battles for her. You've already established ponies as somewhere between a person and a Pokemon, with Dash being sucked into the pokeball and digesting the oran berries. Let her physically attack Jace as Turtwig takes on Beldam.
And if you were hoping for Jace to be an interesting billion, mission failed. "Devious face?" Literally kicking the dog as he runs off? Being incompetent enough to get beaten by a virgin trainer and an untrained Pokemon?
He's a mustache short of being a card carrying villain!
2071951
yeah about that, I wrote most of these chapters in a day or two so there is a ton of editing I need to do sometime soon.
-I wanted the story to progress at a quick pace to make readers feel like their progressing, I fear if i stay in one town for too long the reader will just skip around while reading waiting for stuff to happen.
-Tracy's reaction I will admit was a little too calm i will go about editing that later.
-as for the EoH and the champions there are 6 of each (if you don't count red and blue, there's Lance, Steven, Wallace, Cynthia, Alder, and Iris)
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-Tracy's reaction (as stated before) needs to be edited
-Moms reaction I'm going to keep due to me wanting her to be good source of information and an understanding mother. plus i will explain in later chapters why she doesn't freak out.
-also thanks for the complement.
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to be honest i rushed this chapter pretty quick without explaining a lot.
-the PoV issue will be edited at a later date
-Why the group didn't use the pony's before was because they didn't physically bring them over, they used teleportation to bring them over. They weren't ready for tracking them so they sent Jace out to get them.
-I don't write in RD's personality a lot so I'm still working on quality issues.
-about Jace... yeah i kinda flopped on that one, i have no idea what i was thinking when i wrote "devious face" that was a big mistake on my part. i really rushed the battle and the end chapter.
Overall thanks for your time and effort, i see that i need a lot of editing in order for this to be done. Your input is really going to help me fix this.
Hey man, I just do what I can to help others improve. I like a good crossover as much as the dude, and sometimes that means helping a few along.
2074988 How can a pokemon trainer help in a battle? will eventually the pokemon get too strong and she will have to focus on getting help from her pokemon, and how can she directly change the surroundings? I know they are peopole but I am not sure what the battles will be like, if you can tell me that would be great.
2090263
Okay so, this story is as if pokemon were real, real situations and what not. so if the trainer has the capability to help out in a battle then they can, it's not going to be limited to how the game is. so you will possibly see a martial artist master fighting alongside his Lucario or people pointing guns at eachother. with the way im portraying this world, pokemon are there and people aren't as nice as they are in the anime or the games.
Pokemon are already Over powered as it is, and a trainer helping out is a double edge sword, they can help win in an unofficial match, but they run the risk of getting hurt. Also when the match is official and there's a judge working, no help from the trainer would be allowed.
Changing scenery? i know i rushed the chapter somewhat but im pretty sure i made it clear that RD went into the forest to train. (if you could give me an example where i did change the scenery without knowing it that would help.)
2092959 Sorry the "changing the scenery" part I meant when Rainbow Dash kicked up the dust cloud.
>> kenneth8112 will Beldum become RD newest pokemon?
Going to be rewriting the RD chapter, i will repost it when I'm finished.
I'm gonna say
watch when Fluttershy gets all the rare colored pokemon when they approach her
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Love the stroy
Keep the updates coming
The second Pinkie is superflous.
Also, while it is nicely written, I agree with Forderz here that you really rushed it in this chapter.
It seems this story was mistakenly upated without new chapters.
hurr
>you got new mail!
>new chapter
>*click*
>no new chapter!
FFFFUUUUUU!
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sorry about that slipped and hit publish instead of edit.
just a little update, it needs like 3 more paragraphs to be finished. going to be kinda short saddly, but dont worry people, im back to writing again.
edit: the chapter is finished now
oh been while since I read this and good job.