They say that love works in mysterious ways. I always thought this was something people told the less fortunate that haven't found love yet. It's very similar to the whole "there's plenty more in the sea" theory. I'm a little skeptical about the whole situation. At least up until that one faithful morning. Where I met that special someone. . . or rather special somepony.
**Don't worry this is not a clop story. It's a true love never wanting to let go of that better half of yours story.**
Chapters (6)
"Your" is possessive. "You're" is a contraction.
"Take me to your leader."
"I know you're in there."
2080582thanks for letting me know i'll get that fixed as soon as possible.
Looks promising will keep checking for updates
2087352 Thanks!
This story Is great
. Thank you for writing it 
What the fuck is going on?
2142986 Don't worry I'll explain the situation in the next chapter. Sorry for any confusion.
Will it be soon?
2143140 Working on it right now. . . should have it up sometime tomorrow. . . . maybe late afternoon.
Man this is good...must keep reading
Kill the colors for speech. It is far more disconcerting than helpful.
2146587 that's no problem i thought that the colors would help visualize that characters saying that so you (the reader) could place the scene with your imagination. i have no problem getting rid of that colors. . . just thought they would help make it easier follow the story. . . .thanks for letting me know.
Why do you have to do this to me? Making me wait! Oh Celestia the waiting I can't take much more of it.
I need my chapters man I can't stop thinking what's gonna happen next.
2147308 That's the point!
Oh and one more thing. . . . Chapter 5 : The Truth
You're going to make my head asplode!!!
You're going to make my head asplode!!!
2147748 Terribly sorry i gave you chapter 6 not chapter 5 so to clear things up. . . .
Chapter 5 : The Rescue
Chapter 6 : The Truth
again sorry for the confusion
This is very good for a first story, and besides a few interchanged words every now and then, it is very well written. I cant wait for more!
This is awesome!!! must read again and again and again...............
2148576 Thanks! I'm having more writers block at the moment for the next chapter, other than that I greatly appreciate all of the positive feed back!! It really and truly means alot to me thanks again!
~Daniel FluttershyGuy McNeil
P.S~ this reply is for all that read!!
Hey just so everypony knows I've noticed that you(the readers) can't get enough of my story. . . .so I'm going to lengthen the chapter longer than the others. not sure how long at this point, but the sky's the limit! and one more thing. . . . chapter 5= EPIC (In my opinion) Thanks
~Daniel FluttershyGuy McNeil
This caught my attention under your "summery" story explanation.
2205843 Thanks for pointing that out to me. Just fixed it.
When I got closer I found him . He then said hello and it scared me because I've never seen anything like him. That's when I ran back to Ponyville." "Of course! That must be how I got hear!"
Just a Grammar Correction
Its Here, not here
2619365 Hey, thanks for that!
While I really love the concept, the execution of the writing just isn't doing it for me. Try to make your words flow better. Readers like stories that they can't put down, and the way this story is worded and written, I want to put it down.
I think you have some great ideas, you just need to find a way to word them in a way that's more pleasing to read.