• Member Since 25th Jan, 2013
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Mr Chimokun


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A crimson star overheard looms over the peaceful land of Equestria. As the laws of the universe collapse, so do the hopes of the ponies, as their situation turns to dire peril. Celestia suspects the work of Discord, the spirit of Chaos and the appointed Universal God of Chaos. Is his actions causing this entropy? Or is it a force unlike anything they ever faced before?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

There doesn't seem to be any satisfying conclusion. What's with the meteor? What work is this story crossing over with?

oops. I put this as "complete" instead of "incomplete". (where's my muffins?):derpytongue2: Its actually a long set of chapters and this is only part one. There will be more to come.:heart:

2021376 oops, forgot to put it as "incomplete". There's a lot more where this came from don't fret. As for the crossover...lets just say the villain's goal is to bring the universe to ZERO, "hint hint"

Hmm, interesting. Let's see where this goes. Word of advice though, NEVER rush to publish what you have. I can see a lot more errors in this one than the last one. After work I'll see if I can't point them out. Other than that, I'm curious how this will go. Lead on good sir.

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