Now I’ve awoken, and I’m taking back control.
When Twilight's morning routine is interrupted by Rainbow Dash crashing into her home and dousing herself in mud, Twilight finds herself letting Rainbow Dash use her shower. What could possibly go wrong?
Thanks to Emerald Flight for the cover art!
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This is a good story and is so very funny to me. I also liked the length of the chapter and cannot wait for more. I am a complete and total shipping junky.
This is the one from DeviantArt?
Incomplete?!
had a crush on her, that should be have not had, only error I noticed. On a different note, loved the story, twas adorable.
......I could've sworn there was another story with the EXACT SAME TITLE....
*EDIT*
Yeah, this is the EXACT SAME STORY. Huh.
LMAO
ok this was fantastic!!!
I loved it.
was that it? or will there be more?
Only 25 likes and 5 comments, yet in the feature box?
FiMFiction, you dun goofed again.
Nothing like cute little TwiDash to brighten the night!
Dat fic, the first twidash fic i read, i loved tha time and love it now
This is a well written story, so it deserves to be in the featured box.
Anyways, I'm waiting for the next chapter(s)
Will there be more?
Yeah, I see you're not QUITE done editing, but I'll let you find what I mean so you can learn to proof your own stuff :p
Incomplete?!
Of all the best possible things ... THIS ... IS ... THE ... BEST ... POSSIBLE ... THING!
In all seriousness though, I'm looking forwards to seeing more!
Congrats on the featured box, mate! Nice dialogue, realistic. Well-paced plot (poor Twilight, though :P). Fun characters. And naturally, TwiDash 4evah.
Though I am no means an expert on fic judging, I think I can say that from an objective and a subjective standpoint: fic = good :D.
Excellent work but a few editing skews but all and all a great read thus far
Reads.
LOLs to no end.
Favorites.
Fantastic. Simply amazing. I can hardly wait for more.
Okay, that story was beautiful, well written, and hilarious. Good job!
This is a good and hilarious beginning. Good job! Can't wait for more.
very cute!!!!!!
2024140
There's also how much time it took since publicly readable.
Anyways... I'll have to read this later, I don't have time now.
Read the version posted on DeviatArt, liked it then, like it even more now.
The changes you've made are all for the better.
2022755 Thanks!
2023279 Yes, yes it is! And it is also incomplete too!
2023527 Thanks! I missed that.
2023687 Yeah, I wrote the other one, but it was horrible. So, i sorta fixed it.
2024055 There will be more, don't you worry.
2024140 Yeah, I was wondering why (And how) I got featured too. But hey, no complaints.
2024306 Oh yeah!
2024345 Thank you!
2024351 Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Oh, and your words comfort me. Thanks.
2024439 Of course!
2024504 Quite done? Heck, I barely got a quarter of what I wanted done. The only reason this fic is even online is because I promised myself I would post it before I went to work. I plan on rewriting almost everything tomorrow, when I have time.
2024570 Thank you so much!
2024730 .... Silent Bob? The writer of one of my fav fics, liking something I made?
Excuse me, I gotta squee.
Thank you!!
2024808 Yeah, that kinda happens. Sorry!
2024941 I'm happy you liked it! As for the art, eh, maybe. It was the only thing that didn't contradict my head canon for the moment I found, but there most likely is a piece somewhere that would fit.
2025234 Thank you!
2025349 Thanks!
2025755 I'm glad you liked it! Maybe I should put a comedy tag under it...
2025772 Thanks!
2026197 Yeah, It got approved around, what, 10 PM? I don't really know offhand. I'll get back to you with that.
2026463 You read the original? Awesome! Ironically, the end I made for this was the ending I wanted originally, but I lacked the skill to make it right the first time. Thanks!
And so many comments! I really regret having to work until 4:30 in the morning, because I didn't really know I was featured until 1 PM.
Thank you everyone!
2026587
You're welcome. As a matter of fact, I'm almost done reading.
i like it! keep up the good work
2026590 I checked, It got accepted around 10 PM, Eastern standard time.
2026605
That wouldn't have been all that long ago, but I had a virus last night, so I had no computer.
Now that I've finished it, I can safely say... this was awesome!
2026613 Thank you so much! I can't say that I am happy with it, but I am glad that I didn't bomb either. I am sincerely glad that you liked it!
2026623
If there was anything wrong, I found it to be mostly capitalization.
2026629 Yeah, I've always had a problem with that. Ask my friend, Commentaholic. Either way, I am really happy you liked it. And, when I get my day off tomorrow, I am going to rewrite and fix the rest!
2026587 I could tell, if you believe it. I write quite a bit on non-pony material, not to mention I read. A lot.
My mom was the original grammar nazi, if you need any help with said editing
2026699 Do I believe it? Course I do. I happen to be a card carrying Grammar Nazi myself. I might actually need your help, but I think it would be best to wait until I finish patching the holes in the plot, re-characterizing some of the dialog, and fleshing out the last quarter of the first chapter before I go into the intricacies of correcting nonlinear grammar and roundabout and unneeded dialog. Is that alright?
2026724 As long as you don't need me tomorrow or possibly Monday, as I am relocating, yes that is fine XD
Good I await it...
Bwahahahaha I don't even know where to start....too many awesome and hilarious moments I was LOL all by myself and scaring my cats hehehe ...well written...sweet and funny ...favorited !!!!
awesome
and well written 
great work 
2026587
oh god so many replies
...
i'd probably do the same thing if i wrote a story
Incomplete.....
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That was awesome.
Hey I for one say that grammar mistakes shows authors true character. So come on cut him/her some slack
This is fantastic, great story.
This story has a very unique hilarity to it and brings out great funny moments where the awkwardness at the time helps to guide one part of the story into another part effectively.
Im very interested in this style of writing by the author as the authors unique approach has me laughing here and feeling awkward the next. This meaning that I feel the emotions of each character in the story as if I was actually there.
A good trait to have in good fiction stories.Cant wait to see if more chapters will follow up this story with more detail. Great job bro-hoof*
(on the side I feel like a good song to along with the story should be included) Song was best choice I could find that match the passion and personalities of the two ponies.
Where did you get the notion of a
?
I've never heard of such a thing. Isn't water always piped in cold, and heated up at each home?
2026922 Um, is Wednesday good?
2026944 Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
2026965 Thank you!
2027652 Oh yes. It should, with any luck, B gud.
2027693 Maybe....
2027695 You could? Yes please!!!
2027791 Thanks! I'm really happy you liked it!
2028723 Thank you so much!
2028792 Ummm...
2028825 Thank you! As I said earlier, I was only a quarter done, but now I got a direction. Thank you again!
2028920 Thanks! And thank you for the song as well! I am happy that my strange comedy style works.
2028948 Umm... Yeah! That sums that up pretty much. However, that is only a three quarters of the fan fics. Fifteen percent of them aren't even romance, and ten percent of them skip directly to 00:36.
2029149 It's a Pleasure! Yeah, I'm currently studying medical science and biology. I'm not a college grad yet, however. So, I'm technically not a scientist. However, I do enjoy my studies in the field!
2029143 Should be fine, assuming net is up in time :p
2029161 Alright!
2029168 Awesome! What is your field of biology? I am going to guess herpetology, due to the large amount of reptiles in Australia?
2028943 Remember the episode where Twilight complains about how Spike used all of the town's hot water by taking a six hour bubble bath?
2029183 Well, that makes sense. Sounds cool! I personally enjoy the study of the central nervous system of humans myself.
2029208 It would. But it also sounds heavily uncomfortable.