Before Twilight ever met her friends, she was just a student under the watchful eye of her mentor, Princess Celestia. But even with her magic, she still needs help once and a while. But what will she do when her assistant is a small baby dragon?
Before Twilight ever met her friends, she was just a student under the watchful eye of her mentor, Princess Celestia. But even with her magic, she still needs help once and a while. But what will she do when her assistant is a small baby dragon?
D'awwww
Pretty good start.
It's a little short but the flow of the story is clear and feels natural.
Keep it up! :)
Sorry for the bad english
I'm always up for some adorable Filly Twilight & Hatchling Spike stories. If you ask me, though, I like the idea that she named Spike by taking letters from her own name.
I enjoyed this immensely more please.
Well, i think you should write more before criticizing.
So far your writing style is good and flawless
If you aren't gonna do the next chapter..may I continue it?