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BronifiedMind


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After years of waiting...

You wrote another story.

First chapter was really good. Second chapter though, I wasn't really a fan of it. Not downvoting or anything, just leaving a few thoughts.

I have to agree with The Dragon Warlock. First chapter was very good but the 2nd chapter pretty much killed my liking this story. Not only is Shining bi-sexual but he prefers to be on the receiving end and treated like a bitch just to be fucked?

Contains age-play and crossdressing! Sweetness!

Fuck off.

Me Gusta :trollestia:

This is pretty sexy. Not gonna lie. Thumbs up.

I thought you might enjoy being my bitch tonight. I've seen how you look at the women during the royal festivals. You're not only checking out their flanks, you're wondering what their dresses would look like on you.”

I have my sources Shining, and from what they've told me, you like to be on the receiving end of Bluestreak's manhood!” Shining was aghast. His mouth dropped. How can she know that?, he thought.

Women? Manhood? Now I'm thinking of them as humans or anthros! :raritydespair:

Hot hot hot!!! I really enjoyed reading. Thumbs up!:heart:

Comment posted by Brony2893 deleted Feb 6th, 2013

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Goodness gracious! The last thing I want is anything related to anthro at all anywhere in this story. Fixed. ty! :twilightsheepish:

Gah! You wrote a story when I'm not available to assist with editing?:raritydespair: Well... next time, I'll be ready!

Chapter one has several moments when grammar was errored. Plus, you're telling instead of showing. It's mostly random too. I'd show you what I mean, but it's extremely difficult when using a PS3. Once I get my computer back, I'll help you give this a good polishing! Okay?:raritywink:

Its a pretty damn hot visual of chapter 2

It's, not its. These little mistakes pop up more frequently then in chapter one. And dude, this fic... Holy shit.:rainbowderp:

2084014 I know the picture you are talking about and I believe I had it but my comp crashed and wiped the memory for EVERYTHING on it.

Might aswell be reading foalcon. If you enjoy foalcon you are one sick fuck.

There aren't enough bi stories like this. Good stuff, man.:rainbowwild:

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Interesting that Mr Poot, who is one of my watchers, chose to follow me after my last story, which contained far more depravity.

And has Mr. Poot taken the time to visit every story of every fetish he doesn't approve of just to leave nasty comments?

Kindergartners know that if you have nothing nice to say, say nothing at all.

2092003 Quit saying the same thing over and over if you don't have something original to say! Oh, about that piece of crazy shit, I'm reading it for the complete and crazy lulz. :pinkiesmile:

Me muchas gusta!!! ;D Hella sexy.:pinkiesmile:

Oh my FRICKING GOD!! I died of laughter all throught the second chapter!:rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:

Comment posted by Inkblot deleted Feb 11th, 2013

this is great XD

I can't decide if it was hot, or just downright wrong! I mean, I wouldn't even go that far with my fics, and I'm a sick, perverted stallion!

Damn sexy! I hope we can see more of these two in the future.

It's times like these that make me wonder why I chose Khorne instead of Slaanesh....

Fuck it. I'm going Chaos Undivided.

Story was hot! Hot! HOT!

:pinkiecrazy:

Chapter One was damn fucking hot! All of that dirty talk and incest roleplay during the sex scene in the shower made me jizz in my pants (getthereference? :trollestia:). However, chapter two wasn't as good as the last one but it's still pretty solid. :yay:

I wonder if Cadence was also Shining's sister? :pinkiecrazy:

2084218 well a PS3 it's a good thing your not one of microsoft's bitches

oh luna yes yes this story was so bucking amazing like like like and favourite

5072283 Why have people taken a fancy to replying to comments made either nearly or over a year ago?

this was made HOOOOW LONG AGO D: ???
why am i only seeing it just now???.....

Role play sure is something we all can enjoy :twilightsmile: Wile the fitting theme is different for everyone its always good to keep a open mind :ajsmug: Well done =3

Well... All that counts in the end is a happy ending for a loving couple :heart: :twilightsmile:

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Because we read it years later :derpytongue2:

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PRICELESS! 1. the story 2. Exacly

After a few minutes of hard fucking, Shining leaned foreword

Forward*

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