The selfish desire of humanity causes wars and hatred is born on it, and that it's how my hate for humanity was birth.
Spike tells Rarity that he loves her but Rarity would not be able to return the feelings he had for her. How will he make it with a heartbreak?
Author's Note: Now, Sparity fans. If you don't like this fic, then don't read this. Because I will remove any comments who flame me, this fic is don't attacking anyone.
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New Felixdawn story?
Aw hell yes.
2089681
Awww yeah! This is going to be fucking amazing.
2089687 I know right
I LUV DIS !!!1!!1!one!!
2089694 It's like LSD. You never know what you're going to see, but you can be sure it's going to leave you utterly baffled.
Oh boy, here we go!
[Now Playing - "We Gon Get Fucked Up" by Jose Cuervo]
EDIT: I came expecting shit, and did not leave disappointed. 10/5
Let me into your heart!!!. Let me be your saviour!!!. Nail me to a cro!!!... Oh look, Felix has released a new fic. *sits down with a box o' popcorn* Click click.
Holy shit!!!... Am I seeing punctuation in this here chapter?!?!.
By jove, When I saw that first comma. I thought to my self "this fic has potential".
But when I saw waves upon waves of bad grammer. I saw this fic not lasting, as long as I thought it would.
But my all round score for this fic must be: 6/10. considering the punctuation effert one had put in. You could of had a better score, if you just checked you're spelling.
yours faithfully
- Rawhavoc
Your writing still aggravates the shit out of me.
Why do you even bother?
Wow, this is some A-grade quality horse manure. That is considered a very high achievement in Alberta you know.
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Didn't you all like that part which was there TWICE? Twice man twice. It was like someone took the TARDIS and then did the same thing again. Or maybe it was a DeLorian. (Seriously Felix you have the exact same section twice)Good job, now that time paradox is fixed.
Anyhow up vote for life man. A sweet little Spikebelle fic.
2089889
As for you.
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Note: Printing out and burning any fic written by Felixdawn is considered illegal, inhaling the fumes is the equivalent of smoking pot for life. It will make you that high.
2089903
Dude, that just doubles the greatness.
2089889
Dude, are you fucking stupid? Don't try to correct FelixDawn. In Puerto Rico, correcting someone's spelling and grammar is equivocal to dickslapping someone in the face whilst shitting on their carpet and double flipping them off.
So yeah, way to go asshole.
2089903
I know, that wall of text that showed up twice. Was like getting two hot iron spikes shoved into your brain.
But I was just praising Felix, for his use of "punctuation".
Oh yes, if that link sends me to a picture that says i'm blind... I probably am do to Felix's shitty grammer skills.
2089946
No, it's a Boromir "One does not simply" meme.
You should have a basic understanding of grammar yourself before you start correcting other peoples' grammar.
2089946
Seriously, leave Felix alone. You have no room to speak. None. At. All.
2089900
And why you ever bother comment?
2089953
Meh... Its a small mistake, easily changeable.
2089961
Where in this shit hole of a planet we call home, did you come from?.
You came out'a fucking no where.
2089986
*It's.
As for Eric, I suspect he came from the depths of hell. To torment you, Rawvious Havocer.
2089994
Again why you ever bother comment troll?
2089986
What hole did I come out of? My mother's vagina. Just like every other human on this planet. Didn't your mommy tell you where babies came from? Or are you too young to know things like that?
2089903
What you mean with that?
2090025
Well that proof you are a arrogant yourself too, troll
This is going to be soo good!
2090022
PMing it to you, I know how you don't like people to paste parts of your story.
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What the *censored* okay I'm not a brony anymore
2090054
Psst, all his fics are like this. We've come to accept him for who he is...
2090054
Embrace the FelixDawn! There is no other way.
Felix the Cat, the wonderful wonderful cat. Whenever he's in a fix, he reaches into his bag of fics!
2089889
Because I'm bored, I'm going to review your attempted review of the story. Just from a quick glance, I notice your comment has many grammar and spelling errors.
So, I'm going to start with the first line of the comment:
Well, you got this one mostly right, so lucky you, though you didn't need the ellipses after "Holy shit!!!" or the period on the end.
This is where it really began to fell apart. To begin the j in Jove should be capitalized, as Jove is a name, and the W following the comma should be lowercase. After the word "comma", the period should be a comma. My self should be myself, and the comma at the end should be a period.
Switch out "But" for "However, ". Also, you spelled "Grammar" wrong. The period after "grammer" should be a comma. I would reword "I saw this fic not lasting, as long as I thought it would" to something like "I quickly saw the fic not holding up as well as I thought it would, and quickly began to lose interest." Even if you keep what you had originally, the comma after "lasting" is unnecessary.
Okay, "but" is unnecessary, you could remove it. It's "all around" not "all round". Instead of "must be: 6/10" I'd say something like "is around a 6/10". The period after 6/10 should be a comma given the way you structured this. "effert" is spelled incorrectly, it should be "effort". I would reword the last sentence as follows: "You could've gotten a better score, if you'd just checked your spelling and grammar." Even if you keep the original, replace "had" to "gotten" or something synonymous to that. Lastly, it should be "your" not "you're".
I'd rate this attempted review/help post as a 2/10. Your post made very little sense, had very little useful information, and was plagued with spelling and grammar errors itself. Perhaps if you used proper grammar and spelling yourself, you'd come across as a competent person. Right now you just look like a fool.
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Bah, I missed this getting posted. Better late than never, eh?
Hmm... Actually, not bad. I've seen worse, and it's definitely one of your better ones, Felix.
Question: What browser do you use, Felix? Like, internet explorer, mozilla firefox, google chrome, etc?
2091011
Why you asking what browser I using?
2091065 I was wondering if yours has spellcheck, since spellcheck can really, really help with spelling mistakes, since even the best make mistakes with their spelling.
2091075
You so know that I don't care too much about that and eider spellcheck programs not help that much.
2091086 Well, alright, but you'd get some more people to like your stories if the incorrectly words were spelt right, but it's your account and your stories, so you can do whatever you want.
2091099
And eider I don't care for that, taking spellcheck very seriously is very immature I mean a silly comma that I not put
I'm sorry but somepony over react on something like that make me laugh 
2091150 Well, spellcheck is for spelling, not grammar. I'm sure not many people would be happy if I posted a story with every third word being misspelled.
2091158
Well I really don't care about people take think like that too seriously.
2091260
Oh FelixDawn, never stop being you.
I am using this as an OC name someday.
Ah, FelixDawn. Keep writing stuff.
You get an upvote because fuck dislikes. Dislikes suck.
I would've complained about your grammar, but I read the comments and decided otherwise! So now imma go jump on the FelixDawn bandwagon and have a fucking awesome time.