Longtime fic author for other series, father of two, and I enjoy MLP:FiM with my whole family.
A random question about who's the better baker - Pinkie Pie or Applejack - leads the two Earth pony friends to think back to when they were fillies and how they met, became friends, and learned to bake from one of Ponyville's most notable bakers.
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Not bad but Pinkie's mane probably would've been poofy and not flat at first,
I really don't know if I like Rarity being the center of attention, it just doesn't seem like something she'd like even as a filly. She does want to be recognized but she's not vain.
That hyphen (-) needs to be an em-dash (—).
Now that my obsession with correct grammar is out of the way, I'll tell you what I think of the story.
I love it.
I am especially jittery over using songs from the show within your story. I won't spoil much more than that. Haha!
Keep writing, you're definitely going on my watch/favourite/everything-else list. Upvote for you!
~Roseheart
This was so adorably awesome! I loved every line of it!
This seems to be a kind of sequel to 'A Simpler Time'. Might we get more? Good to see more stuff like the aforementioned story at any rate.
That was a very nice, cute little story. Well done.
Very well done, this was an adorable story
I loved it.
This is really adorable and sweet.
Really nicely done!
Very cute!
Hmm, cute, but I can't honestly say I liked it as much as your story about Twilight and Rarity. That one would have been hard to top, though, being one of only like 5 stories I had in my favorites list back when "favorite" meant more than just being on a tracking list.
I think from this story, the one image that's going to stick in my mind is Applejack smiling and giving a wave to Pinkie when she first joined the class. Just for the sake of argument, though, I would say Pinkie's talent is raising ponies' spirits, rather than making them smile. Pretty small difference, of course.
This is going straight to the favourites. Such a great and fantastic story. I love your writing ^.^
Perfect stories.