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Shadow just arrived some hours ago in Ponyville.
The first thing he does was going to school where he met DeepReader, who's becoming
his friend. After school DeepReader told Shadow to search for an home.
He should ask Rainbow Dash about it, and so it continuous.
PS: Sorry for grammar issues, I'm german and english is my second language.
Well, Again sorry
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If I had a quarter for every OC named "Shadow", I'd have... I'd have a lot of money.
"DeepReader" is certainly more original, but neither of these names is pony-like.
Using names that you would actually see in the FIM universe goes a long way toward making your story believable.
Well, DeepReader is the Oc from a friend of mine and thank you for that hint^^
I think I'm going to edit this then.
You might want to sort out your description
other wise you'll have Grammar Nazis all over you, and trust me their annoying 
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Indeed, [they're] annoying :V.
Also, hooray, another story to add to my compilation for editing. Gleeeeee.
Good god that formatting.
So many errors! Does not compute!!! Love the plot but ERROR! ERROR!
just a tip about the English language; if the word ends in "y" and you want to make it plural change it to an "i" so pony is ponies. I before E except after C. blah blah blah. I bet I sound like my English teacher right now
do you need an editor? if you do you can email me the rough drafts, I can edit out grammatical and spelling errors and redo the format so that it will be easier to read.
What?!
Confusing?
keke, my inner Grammer-Nazi is sensing some mistakes~
But still, great Story :'3