Connected

by TheDerpyOutcast

The good people who like this story-

I started the sequel but i had my kindle taken away, so i dont have all of that hard work.

Comments

[Frankie2]

I'm sorry you had your Kindle stolen.

[TheDerpyOutcast]

3385542

No not stolen just taken away by parents

[KoreanLuna]

What will be the name of the sequel?

[GreyPon3]

I don't know if you're still reading these comments since 2013 but I thought I'd leave one. I like the premise of your story. It shows you had a good idea and were able to follow through with the story line. I'm not too sure how old you were at the time you wrote this (young, since your parents took your kindle away) but you show good promise as a writer. I would suggest paying attention in English grammar classes and take a creative writing class to improve your talent. You should rewrite this into a much longer story. I'm sure with a little more age (and experience) under your belt, you will really make this story shine.