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This story follows what happens after Rainbow Dash returns to equestria. Dr. Whooves brings her father to equestria, in the process turning him into a stallion. He ends up with Vinyl Scratch, Octavia, and Doctor Whooves while trying to find his daughter. Be expecting a very interesting twist at the end. I hope you enjoy. I know I enjoyed writing it.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 132 )

2212804 Y u do thees 2 me ;_;

Holy uncapitalized letters, Batman!

Mm.. We kinda already have enough of these already, mate. One MLD story was enough to be perfectly honest.

As if MLD wasn't already bad enough we have to have sequels to it and using other ponies in the place of Rainbow Dash.

This is just as bad as sequels to "Cupcakes" or "The Rainbow Factory".

Title: A sequel to X (not only X, but My Little Dashie as well, what has already thousand and one sequels)
Description: FYI: I'm not sure which, if any, of te [SIC] main six will appear, but Luna and Celestia will.

Creativity... I'm gonna search it somewhere different. Google maybe.

But seriously, no one blames you for actually writing it. It's the posting that's not necessary in such a case. Redoing the same thing again and again is fine in Hollywood, by serious stories (:trollestia:) want to be special in some way. With this unfortunate topic, it's impossible to achieve just that, especially with only 1000 words. Sorry.

It needs work. You need to capitalize better and also need to indent the same amount for different paragraphs. Continue to work on it though. I doubt this will go well, however, because there are way too many My Little Dashie fanfics out there. But continue to improve :pinkiesmile:

After reading this, I feel like writing a troll-fic sequel to one of those overused fics like My Little Dashie.

NOPE! THE NAME ITSELF INSPIRES NOPE.

2213708
I doubt this is a trollfic, these things pop up once in a while. They're actual stories, just really overused concepts and not very well done. (And spin off for that matter. Almost all My Little X's work to these people)

All you haters just buzz off! It's a sequel! There are tons for MLD everywhere. Before downvoting it 'cause it's a sequel, read it, then see how you like it. If you still think it deserves a downvote, then you're free to press the red button.

2214191
I read it.
Been there, done that.

2214329
Fair enough. You have every right to your opinion and so does everyone else. :)

2213085 I think we need the Grammer Police on this one!

While this isn't the most creative or original thing ever, I needed to start somewhere so I started with a story I absolutely loved. I've been writin this in google docks on my iPod, so caps and indents are kinda wierd. And ya, I don't have the best grammer. However, I am trying to make it as unique as I possibly can. Constructive criticism welcome as this is my first thing that I have uploaded to a sight like this ever. Thank you for reading.

And ya, I don't have the best grammer

That's an understatement.

Well, if I was the one to speak, no hate intended.. I suggest you come up with something of your own. Mooching off other successful fan fics is gunna get you nowhere on FIMfiction.
NO.
HATE.
INTENDED.

>My little dashie

Calirolls: no hate taken. Check out my new ORIGINAL work titled sanity

No. Yes... But no. Good idea, pitch it to the original author. But no.

I seem to be having problems with creating a new chapter on here for some reason. It may be a while before I upload a new chapter.

The name is supposed to be: To Equestria

I plan to release once a day, at least least every other.

haha! finally a sequal! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Wel, I'm bored so I'm posting a new chapter

Wel, I'm bored so I'm posting a new chapter

2212882

regidar

regidar i just want you to know

that

i'm going to write

a my little dashie related story

also you just lost the game

meh god i LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

COOL STORY BRO!!!!!! keep up the good work:pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

this is gonna be a good sequal!:twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::facehoof:

aww he's having flash back's! i know this feel i used't to have my own little world but that changed when i begain going insane and keep't having these as well it felt like i could almost reach out and touch my little dashie and love her again but every time i would reach out and touch her soft rainbow mane it vanished as if where never there and i would began crying for that reason and my parents took notice of this i'll make a story about it ok? and iIF I CAN GET THROUGH THE EMOTION'S DARING ME TO TALK ABOUT MY DASHIE AND HOW MUCH I LOVE'D HER! :'(:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

alright so far so FLY!!:twilightsheepish:

cool alright well via email private messege or blog post a replie to when you get the next chapter out alright? :moustache:

Sorry I was at they the skating rink in Saint Cloud (awesome place, best dj every Friday night) and I've been asleep since then. New chapter coming soon!

Keep up the great work :have a stache :moustache:

Oh god love the reference
"And then we'd have to let Octy in. Next thing ya know, we'd have the mane6 and Big Mac, Princess Molestia, and a genderbent version of myself" :rainbowlaugh:
Great story by the way. nice change to how the story of my little dashie was going. You sir earned yourself a fav, like, and a follow

How many points...

in royal canterlot voice: TEN POINTS TO GRYFINDOR FOR JOLLYROGUE!! I had to stop writing at that point and where he tackled and semi-fake-flirted with Whooves.

AND ANOTHER THIRTY POINTS!!!

Plus ten points to whoever understands the title

dont kill dash if anypony should die it should be luna that die's in the next chapter i i cant belive i just said that but it's true even though it's only a though take it into consideration :pinkiesmile:

It's unlikely that it will be dash, but I'm not ruling it out. It might also be Luna, but unless I build up more of a relationship, unlikely.

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