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The Elusive Badgerpony


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oh

OH

OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH

:raritycry:

ok commence read

2285905 And how was your forage into these shameless, anatomy-ignorant woods?

No shame is not always a bad thing.

Well..... that was..... interesting.

That was great! I find it awkward that I enjoyed the end bit with the eggs the most but for everything else, I'm completely shameless.

Bravo Zulu

surprised megusta :twilightoops:

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I feel like I should leave, but I've been stuck here since then contemplating my life.

2289693 It has that unfortunate effect on people.

2289616 I'm really surprised that nobody mentioned the egg hatching bit before your comment. It's by far the most anatomy-bending, strangest part of the entire fic. But I'm not one to say such things, for I'm the author and thus no proper judge.

I knew that the spider would be discord even before I read it. :moustache:
But I could have never expected the ending :derpyderp2:

Interesting... I actually quite liked this... I have see doujinshis with monster girls (even spider girls) so that
might be part of the reason.

I think I just find Discord's characterization to be pretty accurate despite this rather unique situation.
Most writers here probably wouldn't be able to pull that off very well.

The situation of them knowing of Japan was slightly off-putting, but with Discord being Discord and Fluttershy
seeming to know Discord on a very intimate level, it is kind of self-explanatory.

2297025 Similar to the Shopkeeper from Magic Duel, I guess. Ponies are ponies.

Why do I have a boner?
Oh well even if I'm not into spiders, anything could have sex with Fluttershy and it will be hot.

Awesome!

Sequel with RD needed.

At first i was like:pinkiesick: because afraid of spiders.
But then I :pinkiehappy: because Fluttercord.
Ultimately it made me i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/488/405/402.jpg
Still get an upvote and fav

>and struggled in here bindings
*her

>gracefully snapping itself onto it’s web, it’s mandibles gnashing
>a grin was playing in it’s eyes
>flipping on it’s back
>forcing it’s way out
"it's" means "it is" or "it has". "its" is possessive.

>before somepony else crashed into it
I think this should say "crashes" :moustache:

Ok. Still wondering if I want my name on this but oh well.

I've read clop before and generally don't mind if it gets a little weird, but this left me speechless and totally confused.
Only one thing to say:
Huh?

Rainbow dash one please

Why are there not more pregnant pony stories?

WHAT. THE. FUCK.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I began reading this with trepidation, but it's actually quite good! The characterization is believable, and it's kinda cute, especially how you touched upon Discord and Flutters' friendship. The end was a little gross, but other than that, thumbs up.

The last line was absolutely perfect. A wonderful way to end a story. And your characterization skills remain as sharp as ever! :twilightsmile:

2624095 Because surprisingly few people have a fetish for that. I don't, and I have a fetish for pretty much everything.

2404073 Thanks for touching on the its/it's thing for me. :twilightsmile:

2338065 Or at least another story in the same universe, only a few days later, where RD can be seen in the background stuck in the web, or where the main characters find her there. Heck, let's just make it as weird as possible and have Featherbrain (or some other obscure character) find her unconscious in the web and take her back to his house and make her their pet. Or, better yet, have a unicorn find her and change her into an octopus which he/she makes into their sex slave, or it could be Discord and he makes RD into his and Fluttershy's newest "toy".

Edit: What the fuck did I just write?

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Triplestache?
Triplestache.

2832645 I was gonna do a follow up featuring multiple fetishes and the like...

2846522 I'm good at thinking up obscure fetishes. :3 Need any help?

2847342 I think I got it covered. I can message you the list real quick if you want it... :raritywink:

“They’re called manga,”

Don't you mean hentai, actually doujinshi would be a better word because it's a sex comic.

2908462 Hentai is a type of manga, and doujin are fan comics in general, not strictly porn

Love how they decided to name the big red dick The Macintosh :D

Needs a sequel with rainbow dash:rainbowdetermined2:

1. No you don't, but we LOOOOVE IT! (like vs. dislike ratio doesn't lie)
2. You should totally do the rest of the Mane 6.

I just couldn't. HOW COME, NO PONY HAS MADE A CLOP-FIC WHERE FLUTERSHY AND DISCORD PHYSICALLY DO IT? IS THAT SO FRIKIN HARD TO ASK!? :flutterrage:

I know Discord is always going to be a bit of a jerk, and in this story they've clearly had sex before, but while the spider webs are an amusing idea, I think forcing the confession and agreement out of her that way doesn't quite work for me (though it being revealed in a game of truth or dare does amuse me.) I'm not sure what would have been better, though, given the plot, such as it is. And during the sex, I think describing the feeling of being suspended in the air could have been fun for Flutters, and the web might have swayed with the motion of his thrusting. In general, I felt the bondage portion wasn't explored very well.

Also, mentioning manga ruined my temporary suspension of disbelief. I suppose they must have a pseudo-France, given the Cutie Pox episode, but mentioning Japan drags me out of the story (even if I could see him enjoying manga and hentai.) And personally I'm not into gore, so I'm extremely happy she said no to that. Weirdly enough, I can't see him being into it either, yet I'm kind of fascinated with how he might do it (considering he's chaos, and he may be able to safely put the pony back together again.)

I'm afraid this story doesn't entirely do it for me, but it's quite inventive and well-written, so I still enjoyed it overall. I also must admit the spider eggs hatching and the babies crawling out of her vagina is really weird and I didn't expect that, but while it was creepy at first, I liked how you described it. Somehow you broke me on the mention of hentai, and sold me on the erotic egg laying! :facehoof: :eeyup:

I never thought I'd read a story with Fluttershy giving birth to spiders. Seriously. I mean, with Discord involved, anything could happened, but... dayum. O_O But overall, good job. *Begins a slow clap while still in shock over creepy spiderlings.*

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